|Reviews for Broken|
| Vermillion Serpent chapter 1 . 12/27/2009
Aw, the ending is so nice, that's the sort of thing that makes me smile, forgetting the sadness for just a while.
| KioniYuki chapter 1 . 8/14/2009
Aw, so sad...made me cry...
very nicely written
| Kairi21 chapter 1 . 6/15/2009
I may have missed something but who is Misty? Also, I think "Maiya" was spelled as "Maya" (at least in the english release of the game.
A complete 360 from your other poem (Waking Up to You), this one is full of the heavy feeling impending loss. I perceive the way you write Mint as an stronger, more mature woman. It's an interesting change from her more comical persona in the game.
Your poems are a treat to read. Please do keep writing. _