|Reviews for On Returning|
| DragonHalf chapter 1 . 1/19/2014
| Sedulously Sadistic chapter 1 . 5/3/2013
I think they are a little OOC but it definately wasn't bad. I love how eccentric you make Lloyd. I like how you have Milly open up a bit because despite her outward super outgoing, cheerful, overly sexual, inappropirate, hilarious demeanor on the inside she is actually very kind, sweet and actually a little shy. She just pretends like everything is fine even when it isn't. I think you did that well but I would have liked to see her bubbly personality shine through a bit more too. Lloyd...I think you did him pretty well. There's just one thing though (which I wouldn't expect you to include because it interferes with the ship...)...he's a sociopath...That tends to affect his character. Good job though.
| clow-san chapter 1 . 6/17/2009
yes! a lloyd/milly fic! It is sad that fics about them are so rare. They are a good couple in retrospect. Hope you'll write more.
| Icebound Observer chapter 1 . 6/15/2009
You do this very well.