|Reviews for Why We Don't Look Back|
| Princess Fairy chapter 8 . 1/21/2013
Before I read your stories, I had this idea that multichapter stories cant be short stories. But you changed that idea of mine. Your stories are never novels or novellas. They are short stories with all its sweetness and melancholy. It leaves one yearning not more only its obvious that there cant be anything more, because you have said everything there is worth saying and it is the silence that is shaping the tale. That is what it feel like, to me. The story is silent, and that very emptyness is the song. It is like looking at a black and white memory, beautifull and eerie in its otherworldlyness, but it have to be real because it is a memory.
Have you thought about becoming a full time writer? I am certain you would be one of the best if you do. Perhaps you already are.
May you be blessed by the muses forever.
| Asquerus chapter 8 . 3/4/2012
Wow, weather. Dynamic and versatile. That's you. I would say more but I'm speechless.
Thanks for writing this even though you hated it.
| Asquerus chapter 6 . 3/4/2012
YOU BROUGHT IT BACK!
I FUCKING LOVE YOU FOR THAT!
| Asquerus chapter 1 . 3/4/2012
Aww shiz. I hope this doesn't turn out bad. O.O
As always, weather, this was great. You have talent!
Thanks for posting!
| Raina1 chapter 8 . 6/27/2010
I can't believe I never reviewed this. I'm fixing that right now. This piece is absolutely gorgeous. Beyond that. I tear up every time I read this. You're one of the few writers that writes this pairing so well I can literally FEEL the love and need they have for one another. It's that physical spiritual soulmates thing we all dream of finding someday and you make me feel that between the characters. Even through their fighting and their angry words the love is still there and it's so realistic feeling too like these could be two people. Gah! It's hard to express what this piece made me feel adequately. It's poetry.
| AuthorKylie chapter 7 . 1/4/2010
One of the most amazing stories I've read here. Really! I'm honest. The way you have written it is so interesting, the back and forth of the two styles. The way their voices come out through the writing is truthfully fantastic.
You are a very talented writer!
I have really enjoyed this story. D
Thank you so much for sharing!
| yugiyamifangirl chapter 8 . 6/19/2009
That was good. Glad that everything worked out for them in the end. They really don't follow doctor's orders, which doesn't surprise me. I liked this, and I didn't think that it sucked.
| Rogue1979 chapter 8 . 6/19/2009
I'm glad they made it through everything. Looking forward to your next project. Well done.
| SRRH chapter 8 . 6/19/2009
| TIGGI1 chapter 8 . 6/19/2009
the end ! looking forward to next prjoect lol thanks!
| TIGGI1 chapter 7 . 6/19/2009
thanks i think lol
| MysticalElfGirl chapter 8 . 6/18/2009
Wow, that was short. Haha, I didn't think it was sucky! Way to go! Way to finish! And quickly!
| yugiyamifangirl chapter 7 . 6/18/2009
That was good. I'm glad Yugi's okay and that everything is working out for Yugi and Yami. It's sad that Yugi's father died, but it's a part of life. Glad Yugi's mother finally accepted Yami. Update soon.
| MysticalElfGirl chapter 7 . 6/18/2009
Aw, but I loved it! Really fast updates! o_o
| Rogue1979 chapter 7 . 6/18/2009
These two chapters were good. I loved how Yami was kind of numb in the last one and how Yugi actually got annoyed that him a and his mother are getting along now, but not annoyed.
It's terrible when an author hates their own story. You have a wonderful writing style and you keep the chapters short. That is what's wrong with me, I think, I try to make my chapters really long and so the story gets longer and longer. You're cranking out chapter after chapter, and I've got writers block...lol. I admire you.
Looking forward to the last chapter.