Reviews for Unbound Energy
NeedAAccount chapter 1 . 6/14/2011
Can I hide in a corner and hope to not look at one of Naruto girlfriends?
ForeverFighter chapter 1 . 5/30/2010
Haha. I so want to Dark Rasengan Lee's pansy ass.
leogirl321 chapter 1 . 6/15/2009
liked it nice job!
For the love of DOG chapter 1 . 6/15/2009
You're right, the ending wasn't spectacular. Neither was the beginning. As a matter of fact, this entire "story" was lacking.

And judging by your other "stories" and "poems" lacking is par for the course. I read all 96 of your "works" in less than an hour. They put me to sleep for four.

Did you write those at 1 A.M. also?

If so, you need a better excuse.

Too many authors here write in the early hours and they don't seem to have a problem producing quality work rich in detail and imagination.

Try again. Try harder with a tad bit of effort.