Reviews for The Swan Twins
vampirelady13 chapter 10 . 9/19
Bella is a spoiled bitch and dresses like a slut who is begging to be treated inappropriately because she wants to dress like a who're. You story is horrible.
Guest chapter 1 . 12/23/2017
Wow I can see they really care about Charlie. Not talking to him for two years that's disgusting. They both seem to care about money more than there father. I feel bad for Charlie having kids who care more about money then him. I hope he with Sue and her kids can teach Bella and Emmett what a wonderful father they are treating like carp.
Guest chapter 12 . 7/31/2017
Your story would be good if you didn't repeat the same dialog over and over from différent viewpoints. Just give one viewpoint and move on. Or drags thé story.
CarvieCamfia chapter 43 . 10/27/2016
When you updating? Been waiting for ages
CarvieCamfia chapter 44 . 5/25/2015
Updste please xxxxx
GeminiEyes chapter 41 . 4/5/2015
well its been a long time since ive read any of this story but I have been holding out hope that you would finish it *fingers cross* that u get back in the mood
Guest chapter 44 . 2/27/2015
I read this story once or twice a year and honestly it's the best story on fan fiction. Please continue writing. 3
eddiepixie chapter 44 . 1/3/2015
wow cool but dude u left us hanging nice story by the way
GeminiEyes chapter 43 . 12/1/2014
well its been a long time since ive read any of this story but I have been holding out hope that you would finish it *fingers cross* that u get back in the mood
Motherof8 chapter 44 . 10/25/2014
Hi, I would love to read this. Hope you can be able to finish it. Thanks for taking the time out of your busy life to write for us.
bullied no more2 chapter 44 . 5/31/2014
Umm... I don't know if ull c this but I wanted to ask can u please finish this I know I might be to late but this story inspired me. I was bullied but when I read this I learned to stand up for my self. I have lots of codefendants now... please or at least make one more chapter
Jen chapter 7 . 5/24/2014
You really need to work on your grammar. It's (you're) for you are, (were) instead of was, and NO ONE says No more, or I seen. I'd like the story if I wasn't too busy cringing. It gives me a very bad picture of who Bella and Emmett are as people.
Edwardsgirlsince1918 chapter 44 . 5/10/2014
Good chapter I loved it
Liz 1974 chapter 44 . 1/20/2014
Oh I understand I have a 13 year old but I hope u complete it asap
nessa01 chapter 44 . 12/10/2013
Wow i love this story! I cant wait to find out about her past! For some reason i am thinking she was like a stripper or something!
Look forward to reading more!
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