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Guest chapter 3 . 10/1
What Kakashi did at the carriage/whatever was rape already. Then proceeding to bed straight away? Not humane to the bride. He supposedly goes so crazy about her that he can't hold himself? Most common false shit rapists sprout. NOT how men work.
shika93 chapter 1 . 4/12
Ha good beginning. Ha she pull a Hinata.
angilo-deabo-chi chapter 16 . 5/2/2016
our precious~
angilo-deabo-chi chapter 7 . 5/1/2016
HOW THE FUCK ARE YOU ALIVE SON Like u should. be dead and gone
angilo-deabo-chi chapter 6 . 5/1/2016
he said OMG
angilo-deabo-chi chapter 3 . 5/1/2016
well this escalated quickly
Guest chapter 18 . 4/26/2016
Sorry to disappoint you, but your fanfic isn't finished. It seems rushed and I feel like some chapters are missing parts.
bookworm51485 chapter 1 . 3/21/2016
NamikazE. UZUmaki. SASUke. Spell the character's names correctly. It's not that difficult, it just takes a little bit of effort.
SuperPotterWhoLock110 chapter 18 . 3/13/2016
You're one of my favorite authors. I hope that whatever problems you're having (from what you've written in author notes in some of your other stories) will get better. I look forward to any new updates you post on any of your stories. kudos to you
Guest chapter 18 . 2/22/2016
errors
that everything be perfect so that Uzu would have no regrets about being forced to marry him
Guest chapter 17 . 2/22/2016
errors
They stood there locked in each others embrace partially mourning and partially rejoicing
Guest chapter 16 . 2/22/2016
errors
I tend to be a mite touchy about my age
You have no reason to be touchy about your age Kakashi
Guest chapter 15 . 2/22/2016
writing error
Uzu smiled at him and ran the short distance
Is the married life treating you well?
He would sic them on Gaara
The look that crossed Temari and Kankuro's faces were hilarious
and technically we are here to pay a visit and congratulate
he tossed the kid to Gaara and said something along the lines of "tag your it" and grabbed Uzu
Guest chapter 14 . 2/22/2016
writing errors
and after that had developed the habit of following the younger boy around and warning people off when they tried to get too close to his new little brother
Guest chapter 13 . 2/22/2016
errors
Watching them as Kakashi kissed, touched and fucked
And even if she didn't beg for Kakashi
It was Sasuke's scent that he was picking up on, and he already knew
and quite frankly he wasn't happy
and he would kill the little shit
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