Reviews for The Biggest Mistake
NeptuneMercey chapter 10 . 10/5/2011
I can't wait til the next chapter
permanthiatus chapter 1 . 9/17/2011
Considering beginning are absolute disasters to me, this was a pretty good. You had some punctuation errors, but that's okay.

The only thing I really didn't like too much was to Cullen's reactions. Esme and Carlisle wouldn't have outright snared at Dumbledore and I doubt Rosalie or Emmett would've either. Edward might've if he could sense that Harry was his mate, but since you put no indication that he could it seemed out of character. I'm normally fine with OOCness, but that was a little too much.

I'm going to continue reading :) I should review at least one more time. Honestly, I'm not a big reviewer.
Elfin69 chapter 10 . 9/9/2011
Hopefully Dumbledore was smart enough to have the information of where Harry actually is locked into his mind so that no one can force him to tell where he is. I have a feeling that Harry's occlumency and legimency will actually be stronger now that he is calming his mind down and Bella will not be able to block him. Also, why did the Cullens not call the Quilette Elders on breaking the treaty?
Queengi chapter 10 . 9/7/2011
This story is really good! I hope Harry can get into Bella's mind and obliviate her.
Katsy17 chapter 10 . 9/7/2011
awesome
farawisa chapter 10 . 9/6/2011
well, i liked it and i would like to see how it goes on, so please do!
goodguy4u282008 chapter 10 . 9/6/2011
that was awesome can't wait to read more on it soon
xXxOtAkU-444xXx chapter 10 . 9/5/2011
I like it! **
traceybuie chapter 10 . 9/5/2011
Really good chapter. Can't wait for Harry to tell the cullens about his plan. His leadership ability needs to start showing to them. Aro is going to kidnap a child? what slimy bastards!
Ichigo Mirai chapter 10 . 9/5/2011
this is still really good! wonder what'll happen next... please update whenever you get the chance!
DarkRavie chapter 10 . 9/5/2011
Another very good chapter. I look forward to reading what happens next in your fic.
Selenity84 chapter 10 . 9/5/2011
Loved it! I hope Harry does end up erasing Bella's memories. I hated how she basically taunted the knowledge that she knew in their faces. Maybe Harry can also set her up with Jacob instead?
NANI chapter 9 . 8/22/2011
update!PLEASE!

harry mpreg?
Venus914 chapter 9 . 8/12/2011
Stupid Bella. I just hate her. Why not let Harry Obliviate her?
DedicatedReader chapter 9 . 7/18/2011
Nosy chit! Just Obliviate the bitch D:
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