|Reviews for The Biggest Mistake|
| jaydubya338 chapter 13 . 11/18/2013
Capt'n Black Rose,
I have enjoyed this fanfiction of yours and feel you have done a tremendous job. The only thing that is could suggest to you is in the future when you receive another infantile review, is to immediately delete it and forget that the idiot who wrote it is deleted with it at the same time. You are the author and it is you right to write the story as you see fit. If you wanted to misspell every third word it is your right. You have no obligations to explain things to your readers so that your story is logical to all. THIS IS FANTASY and fantasy has no reality and logic. It is there for people to enjoy and escape real live, to relax and recover from the trials of every day live. Please keep up with your ideas and good writting, you're doing just fine.
P.S. you did explain about the magical scars on Harry during the story and that same explaination had been used in other fanfiction tales so there was no need to apologize to anyone.
| Sweetmouse chapter 12 . 11/15/2013
Your story is great and all but... did you really have to insult 12 year olds I feel offended because I'm 12 years old yet I can write WAY (capitals used for emphasis) better than that person I'm not saying that your specifically referring to 12 year olds but your just giving an example what I'm basically saying is please be more careful about what you write ...I suppose I'm being harsh but that's because I feel offended that you pretty much said that all 12 year olds write like that. I have enjoyed your story so far and I'm happy to see you use correct grammar and spellings which makes me happy :). I can't wait for more and yes I have read the chapters after this one but I'm just specifically referring to this one and I'm rambling...
| Mickey chapter 13 . 11/15/2013
Love it and can't wait to read more
| Guest chapter 13 . 11/14/2013
OMIGOSH. I was retreading your story and suddenly after World History I saw you updated! Try not to wait so long before updating! :3333 :DDDD
| emoprincess3587 chapter 13 . 11/16/2013
Yay how exciting! Poor Fred and George though, I can't wait to see the Volturi get their asses handed to them by a protective and angry Harry and Cullen family :)
| Shebajay chapter 13 . 11/15/2013
I enjoyed reading this chapter. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next.
| noirekitsune chapter 13 . 11/14/2013
I love the story so far!
especially the fact that Harry didn't freak about liking a guy and take FOREVER to make a move, I hate it when a story does that lol
I was just a little disappointed that Bella wasn't killed or tortured a bit, what can I say? im vindictive like that
but im super excited to see what happens with the Volturi, hopefully see Harry kick some ass!
I hope there's more soon!
| Golden Dragon Girl chapter 13 . 11/14/2013
Oh my, I reread this because I forgot it, but oh boy, I can't wait for the next chapter!
| xXxOtAkU-444xXx chapter 13 . 11/14/2013
I like it! **
| lynnwiley chapter 13 . 11/14/2013
OMG... I wish Edward would distract me *drools*. Love this chapter, and I have a feeling Aro will soon be begging someone to take back the twins!
| blackcallalily chapter 13 . 11/14/2013
| lynnwiley chapter 12 . 11/12/2013
Love your writing so much! You make me want to write one of my own, but I, unfortunately lack your skill. Thanks for sharing this, and don't pay attention to flamers... they're typically children who are too cowardly to face people in real life. I think sending harsh anonymous reviews makes them feel powerful for some strange reason.
Whatever their issue is, they are most definitely not worth your time.
| Guest chapter 12 . 10/30/2013
Don't let all those negative comments affect you! Just know that you have a great story and that you really really write well! Take it from a VERY picky reader. ;D This last chapter was very exciting, kinda hated you for the cliffie (LOL) but please please please update soon? Love your fanfic! More power to ya! :D
| Tempt Me More chapter 12 . 10/10/2013
Please come back and finish this! Its a wonderful story that you left cruely hanging D: so please come back and give me..er us more!
| moonprincess97524 chapter 12 . 8/28/2013
The rant is very understandable. Any reader who doesn't understand that real life happens making it difficult if not impossible to update is an idiot, also the wonderful muse of a story can also be rather fickle. I love that Harry was able to get Bella away from Edward so quickly. I love Edwards wonderfully sweet reaction to Harry kissing him. I have to wonder if Harry's magic is enough to blow the Volturi to smithereens? I am eagerly awaiting the next installment to this wonderful story when you are able.