Reviews for The Biggest Mistake
little-bast chapter 12 . 8/9/2012
Great Chapter...Keep them coming!

I would love Harry to to have someone or the twins that are his family like Hermione, Ron, Luna, or Fred and George just think about all the pranks they could do with Vampire speed... tacks on chairs and so on.

Will the American ministry be more open to other species and will they come to introduce themselves? After all he's a new American.

Will Harry open a can of Whoop A** on the Volturi for daring to threaten his family?
Is Harry an animagus and will he warn the Cullens about his animal form?
Wonder how the LA Push pack will react to Harry?

Looking forward to your next chapter...
Can't wait to see what if Harry retaliates...
Hoping for an update soon...
AMarieKelley chapter 12 . 8/9/2012
First, those "Guest" readers can suck it! You write so well! And just because you wrote 12 chapters in 3 years doesn't mean you suck! It means you have a life and your BUSY! How they got to lazy or sucking I'll never know or understand. Second, this. Was. AWESOME! I absolutely loved it! I cannot wait to see the Volturi get their asses handed to them by Harry! :D:D:D Update soon please! :)
Waking Darkness chapter 12 . 8/9/2012
Awesome update! Short though it may have been, I am really glad that you updated so soon. Personally, I am ok with you taking a little longer in posting if it means a longer chapter. You are right a big event took place but you left it at a cliffhanger and now I desperately want to know what happens to the twins and between Harry and Edward. Keep up the good work and don't let the stupid people get under your skin too much.
glitterfairy1990 chapter 12 . 8/9/2012
dont worry, i like your story :) and i got the blood quill reference when you spoke of leaving the magical scars. maybe the other person read it too fast for that to be absorbed? *tries not to outrite call the reviewer stupid* i cant wait for the next chapter :) xx
Elfin69 chapter 12 . 8/9/2012
I really hope that Harry either destroy's the Volturi or scares them so bad that they know not to mess with him again. I cannot wait to see what they have planned. It is wonderful to see that Harry and Edward are finally happy together.
DarkRavie chapter 12 . 8/9/2012
Another very good chapter. You are doing a great job with this fic and I can't wait to read what happens next in your fic.
Twipotterfreak28 chapter 12 . 8/9/2012
Listen, I love this story. Granted I was a bit mad that it had been a long time since your last update, but calling someone names and /not/ leaving a username or logging in just plain old cowardice. I think this story is wonderful and you did put an awful lot of warnings that this story was slash. Those reviews were completely unjustified and unnecessary. I'm pretty sure my opinion doesn't matter, but like I said in my last review, I'm sticking by you until you finish this story off right. You're nt lazy. This little thing gets in the way if writing: life. If they don't understand that, then screw them. You don't need them. Update soon, I love the story and admire you for handling the situation with maturity, instead of screaming like some authors do.

By the way, your summary is freaking awesome:)
emoprincess3587 chapter 12 . 8/9/2012
Yay I was so excited when I got to my inbox and saw this update :) i am on the edge of my seat! I can not wait for the next chapter! Well I say that every time...but ah well...it's true! And about those asshats who wrote shithouse anonymous reviews are cowards. If they aren't going to give helpful feedback and instead write hurtful comments and not leave their names to reply to? Well I hope it doesn't happen again, this story rocks - and so does slash fanfiction - so I hope it doesn't get you down xxx
Beth5572 chapter 12 . 8/9/2012
I would love to see what you write next. Your a great writer and your stories are great too.

Thank you,

Terri
Ichigo Mirai chapter 12 . 8/9/2012
this is still really good! wonder what'll happen next...
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UnableToLogIn chapter 12 . 8/9/2012
Hey! I just wanted to so that i really do enjoy your story, the only thing i would correct is that you go into more detail; about how harry feels, how the cullens feel,- i guess i mean to say to expand on how emotionally envovled they are and such so that the readers become more attached to your characters, go deeper into the relationships and how harry feels about each of the cullens and their relationships with him, you can have them bond over this..uhm ._. what's the word...trauma? i don't know, let's just say the situation. i don't know it's your call, i don't want to mess up your master than that i would say just to make your chapters longer with less breaks, even if it takes longer to update. Quality over Quantity y'know? Keep writing, you're insanely good!
cjewellm chapter 12 . 8/9/2012
Interesting story. Please update soon.
Lizzosaur chapter 12 . 8/9/2012
I knew that was coming! The moment you said two children, let along red heads, I knew they would be kidnapped. Great job, though.
Perline chapter 12 . 8/9/2012
Thanks for the chapter.
I love this story and I wait for more.
Perline
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