Reviews for Black Heart
amh2805246 chapter 3 . 8/6
Sayer don't come back.
amh2805246 chapter 2 . 8/6
Sayer never cared about you Akiza.
amh2805246 chapter 1 . 8/6
Sayer I HATE HIM!
Comet Rose Star Dragon chapter 1 . 2/13/2011
I like your story.
ObsessedwReading chapter 3 . 1/25/2011
I love this! Please continue this.
ObsessedwReading chapter 2 . 1/25/2011
I thik this is a really good fanfic. I hope you'll continue this.
ObsessedwReading chapter 1 . 1/25/2011
This is good so far.
Nitrogirl chapter 1 . 6/30/2009
Divine, you're evil!
akiza50 chapter 1 . 6/18/2009
First of all, you forgot to add periods at the end, like this,

"No" she firmly argued.

It's suppose to be like this.

"No," she firmly agrued.

Plus more details should be added.

Like this:

"Akiza! Akiza!" I roughly shouted. I screamed her name out again and again. The tension, the feeling of her being lost had made me felt guilty.

Her eyes blinked. "Yusei?" her voice broke. She quickly sat up, looking away from us.

I nodded to say "yes?"

"I need to tell you guys something," she said, coldly. She looked back at us, biting her lips. "I think you need to rest more," I heard Leo adviced. Luna nodded in agreement.

"No," she firmly agrued, glaring at Leo and Luna. Everyone, including me, stared at her, stunned. She is moody sometimes, but ever like this.

"I'm leaving." She said. Her voce was cold. Colder than every single time I heard her talk.

'Why?" Mikage asked, confused. She kept her gaze to Aki. Aki ignored her stare and in a quiet voice, she said, "Divine."

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It's better that way, I hope to see you work on the story! Keep writing!
othchick11 chapter 2 . 6/17/2009
The story sounds like it will turn out well, so update soon!
AliADORABLE chapter 2 . 6/17/2009
please continue
GeOrGeIzRiPpiN chapter 1 . 6/15/2009
Great Story!Update soon!
RockyX123 chapter 1 . 6/15/2009
Wait...she is still going with Divine even thought he was using her? Wow...interesting..of course the show made it apparent that she wouldn't forgive him..but still you write the stories. Nice work.
izzybell117 chapter 1 . 6/15/2009
wow I liked this. Pls update soon!