|Reviews for Simplicity|
| softball91 chapter 10 . 7/9/2013
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| sunflowerspot chapter 28 . 6/27/2013
This is so beautiful and kind of bittersweet. Still, I can't help but want to see them both be brave enough to try to bare their hearts and souls as well as their bodies. It doesn't always happen that way, but for these characters and this deep scene, I can't help but hope for the best. :)
I like the format too. It's so personal that way.
| Aki no Ryu chapter 1 . 6/27/2013
That was really cute. I liked your explanation as to what kind of flower Tifa would be. :)
| mom calling chapter 27 . 6/26/2013
I don't remember receiving this. Mayhap it came during one of the too many computer crashes we've had recently...but this is too sad, too sad. How has it come to this schizo place? Skilled you are, but I don't want to hang out in this place. Argh! thx, though... mc
| mom calling chapter 28 . 6/26/2013
This is like looking thru a gauze curtain that's shifting in a breeze. Then, half way thru the prose poem, there comes a gust of wind-the curtains leap and twist and I'm seeing something similar but different... a different girl with different imperatives... Confusing. I hold a polished stone of laboradite to the light and watch the color of the crystaline stone shift as I move it... this storylet reminds me of that. Dreaming, are we? Cloud's never easy to figure out. You're subtle that way, too. Thx mc
| AnimeGirl9297 chapter 27 . 6/7/2013
I love this story! Its so cute! My favorite so far would probably have to be Cloud giving Denzel 'the talk' or Flowers1 and 2. Its a tie because I love CloTi but I also love father-son moments between Cloud and Denzel.
Also, Im not sure if your taking any more story requests but if you are, wanna bout a continuation of the reason Denzel got his own room, and he thinks something is wrong with himself when he gets his first hard on and goes to Cloud for help? Just an idea(:
Too much of a lazy ass to log in
| J Luc Pitard chapter 27 . 6/5/2013
Well written. Honest. Graphic, but not pornographic. Lonely, somehow. The ending leaves you wondering and hoping.
| J Luc Pitard chapter 18 . 6/4/2013
I think this is the best explanation and imagining of him leaving them. Very powerful and well written.
| J Luc Pitard chapter 12 . 6/4/2013
I'm not one for songfics, so I'll admit to skimming the lyrics, but your writing was worth the read!
| J Luc Pitard chapter 2 . 6/4/2013
Lovely story! I like the ambiguity of this and the frustratingly romantic idea he must've had when he planned it out. I could see her laughing and crying and wanting him to be nearby for her to hit him over the head and say, "You couldn't have been more direct?!"
| sunflowerspot chapter 27 . 6/4/2013
this is one of the most beautiful "lemony" stories I've ever read. So emotional and poetic, I've never read anything quite like it. I admit I desperately want to see a follow-up and know that they're more than just two ships passing in the night, but maybe sometimes a moment is just that, a beautiful moment. :)
| fraifrai chapter 1 . 2/7/2012
I'm so tired of angst but you
Made some really cute fluffy ones!
And if I DID want to read angst then I would read yours especially and love it anyways! :3
| Serina Tsuki chapter 26 . 1/24/2012
| TheTwoDragonsQueen chapter 26 . 1/22/2012
wow...just...wow. That was amazing. I loved the fact that Tifa finally told Cloud that she loved him and the immortializing thing was beautiful.
| sunflowerspot chapter 26 . 1/22/2012
These are some very beautiful drabbles. Please keep writing them!