Reviews for Tracey and the Chocolate Factory
Guest chapter 9 . 7/25/2012
suvi-sisko chapter 9 . 10/5/2009
0.o Tracey's an evil genius? That was an unexpected twist. Very unexpected. It was kinda fluffy, but we all need some fluff sometime in our Authoring careers!
Darkamber8828 chapter 9 . 10/4/2009
...pencil army?

He musta been really drunk.
Mantinas chapter 9 . 10/4/2009
This was a great story! Poor, pitiful world; has to cower in fear from awaiting the pencil armies. *laughs* But out of all of them Ash seemed to get the better end of everything. XD
Zefri012 chapter 9 . 10/4/2009
... I'm sorry, did Charlie ever take over the world with an army of pencils?

Welp, and incredibly cheesy, corny, cliched and comical ending, but none of that really matters when you slip an awesome pencil joke like that in... Seriously, THAT'S why he's a pencil addict?

Also: Handyman Shipping ftw!
Mantinas chapter 8 . 10/1/2009
Hahahaha! My favorite's was Ash's, though Paul's was good, too.

No! Tracey still doesn't have a pencil!...And will now be pencilless with a wife! No!
ebg13 chapter 1 . 9/27/2009
Funny. It'll probably get old fast, though. I hope it doesn't.
Darkamber8828 chapter 8 . 9/27/2009
HAHAHA! Poor Paul!
Zefri012 chapter 8 . 9/27/2009


... Now only Dawn and/or Cynthia spring to mind at this concept, either Tracy's got a blond champion hooked or Gary is gonna murder him... Either way, this will be the biggest laugh I know in the history of the universe... Especially now that Paul might be dead. XD
Mantinas chapter 7 . 9/9/2009
Tracey, if it is like how it is with the movie/book, I suggest selling the factory and buy yourself an empire of pencils. But sadly, I know, that won't happen either. Oh well! XD

Great chapter! Oh geez, I'm still laughing!
suvi-sisko chapter 7 . 9/9/2009
I love this story! Will Tracey every get a pencil? Stupid cliffs!
Darkamber8828 chapter 7 . 9/9/2009
HAHAHA! Stupid Paul!
Zefri012 chapter 7 . 9/9/2009
XD Damns straight! Paul had it coming the vain, self obsessed, violent, irritating, childish, wrist slashing, emo shaming, Silver wannabe! ... Yeah, I REALLY hate him... _
Mantinas chapter 6 . 8/13/2009
The Ed Edd n Eddy refrence made me laugh the hardest! Great chapter! The saving the chainsaw icon was also brilliant!
Zefri012 chapter 6 . 8/13/2009
XD Awesome. 'Nuff sed. I'm surprised no one ever thought of this before... And Tracy isn't given enough screen time whatsoever. I shalleth be waiting for the next update... Muahaha...
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