Reviews for Last Dance
xXxDiagurenArticuno1119xXx chapter 1 . 3/20/2014
This was great, I'm a fan of the Medieval Hoennshipping stories too, well pretty much anything with Brendan in it. xD It seems like this one could use a sequel. :3 Maybe since he was mistaken as Aaron, the real Aaron could show up and become an antagonist. Just an idea.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/6/2014
Make a sequel where they get married.

OK?
StrawberryCherry chapter 1 . 8/20/2013
Omg. You must make this a series! :D
Airin G chapter 1 . 7/9/2011
Great one-shot!
Hidden Lines chapter 1 . 5/17/2011
Whoa, nice. I really like your portrayal of the drunken guards. And, of course, the nicely done Hoennshipping.
Tiakaneko chapter 1 . 3/21/2010
Very nicely written! It's great to see good HoennShipping stories every now and then. I, myself, wrote a HoennShipping fic, if you'd like to read it. Thanks in advance, and again, this story of yours truly deserves two thumbs-up!
Jarkes chapter 1 . 6/28/2009
Well, that was... interesting.
Sage Strike2 chapter 1 . 6/27/2009
i really dont know what to was good i guess
Roronoa D. Link chapter 1 . 6/26/2009
Aww, so cute.

I really love it _

The idea to put them into medieval ages is really good. Brendan is really a mysterious guy here.
kloudklocvalley chapter 1 . 6/23/2009
This reminds me of my sister's fanfiction. A mission takes place in the castle, on a day of a festival, and this character forgets about the mission as he's mesmerized by a girl who's known to be the most prettiest in the country.

Then his teammate shouts through the speaker next to his ear, ruining the dance ("What the FUCK are you doing?" LOL).

Man, he should've just stolen it...

-Sparky
PerlaNemesis chapter 1 . 6/21/2009
Awsome story! I like it soo much! Maybe you could write about Sir Aaron and Queen Rin, too?
Quixiote chapter 1 . 6/19/2009
KAWAII! SO ADORABLE! -faints-
Shaw Fujikawa chapter 1 . 6/16/2009
M. True, romance might not be your thing, but you can certainly give it a damn good shot.

And all this talk of Aaron is infuriating. My sibling refuse to stop mocking me about my namesake...

Oi. May's last line does not have a speech mark. Did you proof-read this, or is it just hot off the press?

Hoennshipping! We do not have enough of it these days.

Signing off,

grammaguy
rubynorman chapter 1 . 6/16/2009
awesome. the story's romantic piece. I hope you continue this work :) I'm a big hoennshipping fan. and what's happen with may & Brendan?
akljfakljflkj chapter 1 . 6/15/2009
That was a cute story, I like the concept a lot. I kinda wish I could have thought it up first. I'm a big hoennshipping fan. Please Please Please continue it.
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