Reviews for The Grand Masked Ball
Guest chapter 9 . 8/6/2012
please continue its a great story
Deadlyscorpio chapter 1 . 1/8/2012
Great start you should review my story it is called affair of the heart
mrs. JasperWitlock chapter 1 . 11/12/2011
love it
MollyxKookie chapter 1 . 1/8/2011
Ya its gonna get annoying if you keep writing like this with loadsa slang and no commas and everything bunched up together. Theres a lot of occ in it which i dont mind to much lol. you need each speaker on a new line and a lot less slang and maybe more descrip in ur writing.

e.g: not like above.
melovepickles16 chapter 6 . 8/6/2010
good story.
VampireBookAddict chapter 9 . 4/5/2010
i enjoyed it! :)
katieeblaah chapter 9 . 11/29/2009
Okay no offence but i really don't like this story. I mean Calire's father would never turn crazy and like ARGH i no its just fanfic but it annoys me..but i must say i liked your sequel to "missing"..good job on that.
katieeblaah chapter 8 . 11/29/2009
this stories too far-fetched and poorly written. also its abit hard to read because of all the talking parts put together in a paragraph and also as of all the slang used.
julzzz-and-rae chapter 9 . 7/23/2009
aw

that was so cute

hey you wrote a sequel to missing

i have to go read it
bookworm2341 chapter 9 . 7/15/2009
aww that's so cute.
StoryGirlAngel chapter 6 . 6/23/2009
hahha...i love your story...its so cute..and funny
Alexisrae chapter 2 . 6/17/2009
Good :]

Haha, i love how Eve can change into a black cat and Claire can read minds!

Haha, Shane's!

It's going to be great, can't wait for the ball!

Update soon!
Alexisrae chapter 1 . 6/15/2009
Good, really good :D

I'm wondering why Shane chose to go last though..

Update soon!