Reviews for Yokoshima Mitsukai
Kyosohmasnumber1fan chapter 1 . 4/6/2014
That is some pretty deep stuff.
hatsuyuuki chapter 1 . 3/28/2011
- - - Beautiful, Dark, Twisted.

You portrayed the feelings so well in this oneshot. I could practically see a young teen withering under his god..

I totally got the feeling as if I was in Yuki's mind,and the dark twisted word's totally lured me in.

Well done!

~ Hatuyuuki
the.shadow.of.smoke chapter 1 . 10/12/2010
This is a great story, I really think you capture the emotion well, you can feel what Yuki's feeling. The fact that you don't explain the setting or the time really helps set the mood; like Yuki doesn't care anymore. ...maybe that's not what you were aiming for, but that's what I got...

The only thing I can suggest is you have two typos- you say would instead of world; and vein instead of vain.

But other than that, I can honestly say I love this story.

P.S. - I really do think this is good. )
Tabbyprincess chapter 1 . 12/5/2009
I love your stories...even though you hurt Yuki...I love your stories...
CharlieBrownLover21 chapter 1 . 7/22/2009
Is there going to be more? I really liked this story but it keeps me wanting more. Will there be more? _
RinRinRin chapter 1 . 7/4/2009
(wipes a tear)It's so sad... (smiles)I likes it though... write more fanfictions... please... i hope the rest of your's are just as great...

-Kumiko

Yuki Otaku, Amatuer Manga-Ka
PhoenixPandora chapter 1 . 6/22/2009
is 'the Yokoshima Mitsukai' Fallem angel?

once again awesome!
Papa-Guna chapter 1 . 6/16/2009
Aw, poor Yuki. I loved this, it was so sad and emotional, very well written.
JaspersLilRed chapter 1 . 6/16/2009
WOW! I love Yuki, and that was AWESOME! You should write more to this story! It's so awesome!