Reviews for Breakfast In New York |
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![]() ![]() Meh I'm not continuing, this first chapter was not enticing at all. Basically, she either got knocked up by harry and ran with his kids or got knocked up by some other poorly picked guy, ignored her feelings for Harry and abandoned him. Now they will ignore it all have a bunch of forced drama and get together. |
![]() ![]() This is SO LONG! You could convey this story in a quarter of the text. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This has to be one of my favourite fanfictions. I'm sure I've said it before, but thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I actually cried tears. Running down my face at Colins grave. What a powerful chapter |
![]() ![]() Redundancy, redundancy, redundancy. Are you padding your word count, or do you think your readers need reminding? Over and over. You also need some grammatical help, particularly with apostrophes (plural vs. possessive) and homonyms. Overall, a good story that could be made much better with some solid editing. Thank you for your contribution to the world of Harry Potter Fan Fiction. |
![]() ![]() ![]() We will have to remember that Harry has had a really rough childhood that could be what lead to his overtly stunted emotional growth. He was neglected by his relatives for a decade of his life, that has some adverse effects on a person's mental end emotional development in some ways. So, can he really e blamed for his thick headedness when it comes to emotions? This story is really good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story and recommend it whenever I can. I a tually just saw a rec for Not Normal and will tead it soon. Thanks for your contributions to the world of HP fanfics. |
![]() ![]() ![]() god dayum. what an incredible story. this is now my personal canon. epilogue? what epilogue? i like how you did ron. you may have made him more of an ass than he was in canon, but he was redeemed in the end. the futures of wizarding great britain and the other side characters make so much sense. i kind of wish there was a confrontation with ginny at some point after the wedding- oh, to be a fly on the wall for that- but it makes sense why you didnt. overall, incredibly well written and by far one of my all time favorites. |
![]() ![]() ![]() oooh that last scene at Colin's grave hit hard. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this was such a sweet chapter. oh my god i love this |
![]() ![]() ![]() i was hesitant to pick up this fic at first, everything i've read about it says its amazing, but i was never really able to get into non-hogwarts era fics for some reason. then i started reading this, and just cant stop. its so good so far! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I draw the line at dudley finding the cure for lycanthropy and teaching children science history and math. I know this is fanfic but if this story is canon compliant up till battle of hogwarts than no way does dudley make that quick of a turnaround especially education wise |
![]() ![]() I love this entire story. The range of emotions it brings out in a person are amazing. I left a review a few chapters (27 or 28) ago. Saying that you have a true talent. I now find that to be an understatement. You're now my favorite fan fiction writer. I look forward to reading more of your work. Thank for sure your amazing story with us. |
![]() ![]() Thank you this is a very heartfelt chapter. Both happy and very sad moments. You have a true and wonderful talent. Thank you for sharing your gift with us. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for completing this story. All the fine details make it very enjoyable. (Fixing the Magical loopholes in Customs and Immigration was a fun touch :-)) |