Reviews for Bachelor Party
bettybox chapter 1 . 12/31/2013
I like it
pennypencil123 chapter 1 . 11/5/2011
Love it D totally. you should continue. pleasepleaseplease
fujikawaii10346 chapter 1 . 7/17/2010
Pretty good, but there were just a few grammar errors. You might want to add a "Family" tag, and add Jasper as a main character.
carlisleedwardemmettjasper chapter 1 . 10/12/2009
It was alright. Things it needs improving on: its not detailed enough, its not long enough to explain anything. Things I liked: the untold part of tuxes, and Emmetts seriousness.
motherduckatschool chapter 1 . 9/2/2009
It's really good!

Loved it.

Keep writing,

CupCakeConundrum chapter 1 . 6/16/2009
Love it. Totally funny. And a serious Emmett. That's always a good laugh, i just can't imagine him serious at all.

* hannah *
punkrocker96 chapter 1 . 6/16/2009
i really love it
mountainhunt44 chapter 1 . 6/16/2009
love it it is great wonderful
jeangary28 chapter 1 . 6/15/2009
i really like it i thought that it was a very beautiful story
Nervous.Laugh chapter 1 . 6/15/2009
whoa, that was way cute, and a great idea, i had NO idea it would be about this.

It was really creative, and i love how you wrote this, jasper is total kickass.

This was good the way that you started off doing stuff from BD, and then you ended it in BD and came up with the stuff in the middle.

This was great my beautiful Sam, you should be very proud of yourself :)

another excellent story from sam, also, i thought you HATED one/shots : /

you captured jasper beautifully.

awesome chap my dear one.
Oco chapter 1 . 6/15/2009
Haha i love it :)

Edward is always worried haha :)

he should be afraid of jacob and his sexiness :)

and my name is there!