Reviews for The Love You Deserve
Guest chapter 2 . 2/2/2011
Amazing story. Just...amazing.
eNVey chapter 1 . 8/2/2009
Dude... This is some deep sh*t... It made me cry to think of Edward dying for his family. Absolutely stunningly written.


-Niki Viki
Dazzle Me Again chapter 1 . 7/31/2009
That was so sad. But really, really good, and I loved it.

Have a wonderful day!


PS: Oh, and yes it really WAS absolute perfection. Believe it! :)
AndThePunchesJustKeepComin chapter 1 . 7/22/2009
JennCD chapter 2 . 7/22/2009
Has already voted because this is AWESOME. Just wow. :D
TRDancer chapter 2 . 7/22/2009
Already voted. Because I'm pro like that... w00t! :D
blackandivorykeys chapter 1 . 7/1/2009
Holy fuck...

Oh. My. Edward. Holy...

(That was actually how long my mind waited.)

Adore it. Love it. Made me choke up at parts. LOVE it. Incredible. Amazing. You guys are AMAZING.
kaitlyn chapter 1 . 6/24/2009
you are possibly the most sensational writer i have come across yet. your work was so passionately done, good job.
Dark Masque chapter 1 . 6/22/2009
I loved it. I was crying by the end of the story. The best I've read so far.
JennCD chapter 1 . 6/19/2009
I take so long to review *sigh*

God, I love this story so much. It's my favorite in the contest by far. It was beautifully written, and you two really capture the feeling of the time period. A lot of people can't do that, but it was done perfectly here :D

Lenny, you should write more lemons. It was tasteful and just plain awesome :) haha

I think there is something wrong with me. I cried at the beginning and not at the end :/ haha.

Anyway... it is PERFECT the way it is. Seriously I LOVE the sad ending. Plus everything else... it was just WOW. Amazing... Amazing. Amazing. Amazing. Amazing. :D

~Jenn :D
Dopeshieet chapter 1 . 6/16/2009
awesome story. loved it. write more.!

TRDancer chapter 1 . 6/16/2009
Aw, I loved this so much! It was great! :D
lmno888 chapter 1 . 6/16/2009
OMG this story had me in tears. its so good and sad! amazing work! thanx for writing
Oxygen.and.Cucumber chapter 1 . 6/16/2009
Aw - the only credit I give you, is the credit you deserve.

Besides, ANYTHING beats geometry!