Reviews for Pain
Kenna chapter 1 . 5/7/2013
Beginning and middle was great and I
wondered what was gonna happened next
but you ended it terribly wrong! Why did Nat
have to die :( I NBB. But because of
the way it ended do you?!
Guest chapter 1 . 6/28/2012
Good story
wiz-witch in training chapter 1 . 1/21/2011
I cant believe it! I dont like how you killed Nat, but I really like this fic. I cant help but wonder what would have happened if Alex didnt have the knife. Were those guys just tryimg to scare the boys, or woud they have harmed/kidnapped them? Hm...
haloreach chapter 1 . 11/7/2010
this totally made me cry
The Dark Knight's Revenge chapter 1 . 10/18/2010
Wow...That was so sad! Nat cares so much about Alex, it really is adorable :)
la-la-la-45 chapter 1 . 10/26/2009
Oh that was sad.I'm should do another oneshot about Nat and Alex.
One of a Kind Fanatic chapter 1 . 7/7/2009
Wow, this story is really good.
AnimeGirl375 chapter 1 . 6/24/2009
Aww SO SAD! Great story...i feel sorry for Alex.
hangman005 chapter 1 . 6/17/2009
Great story. Felt it was a bit short, I would be interesting to see what happened in the aftermath.
Marilyn G. i have an acount chapter 1 . 6/16/2009
Idk what's saddest: Nat's death o everyone putting the blame on Alex. :'(