Reviews for Course Correction
Next Time chapter 6 . 10/11/2009
What happened to this story. It doesn't seem done and you mentioned "next time" at the end of chapter 6?

Where did you go?

Pleze come back and continue...
hjr chapter 6 . 8/25/2009
Every chapter is excellent. Are you really going to kill off Boone so soon? One thing that puzzles me is why Sawyer is so concerned about the collapsing cave. Nobody died in that the first time, and it led to Charlie's beating his drug addiction. It was one of the few times Michael shined, and everyone was cooperating in the rescue, so I think Sawyer should focus elsewhere.
KaydenceRei chapter 6 . 8/24/2009
Hot damn. Heh.

I always enjoyed the 'steve' and 'scott' mix up on the island, always something to giggle at.

About time I caught up. Sorry it took me so long, I'm easily distracted these days. But thanks for being patient with me :)
Orion0012 chapter 6 . 8/13/2009
Can't wait to see who kicked the island bucket. I only have a short amount of free time left before I head back to school, then I'll have a lot less time to read. Excited for an update.
CahhFernanda chapter 6 . 7/24/2009
Poor Sawyer! I feel sorry for him... must sucks be the only Oceanic 815 survior with memories. hehehehe

But I don't think that is the pilot who's going to die... I think is Scott (or Steve?)... Or maybe Jack. Just because I'm still pissed at him after the season 5.

Anyway, can't wait for more! :D
KNJ chapter 6 . 7/22/2009
I really enjoyed this chapter and it through some unexpected twists. I really thought the pilot was a goner, but I guess we'll have to wait and see. I also enjoyed the Locke/Sawyer convo, because it was nice to see Locke put in his place. Locke has done a lot for the island, but he's put a lot of people in danger by doing so. Anyway, great chapter, it's a wonderful story.
Coconut1214 chapter 6 . 7/22/2009
This is getting interesting. It is going to drive them crazy trying to save everyone, considering it's pretty impossible. I still think it's the pilot but I suppose it could be Boone or Scott, since no one really knew which was dead in the first place.

Let's see if the student can manuever the master. Because I'm still on the idea that Ben was training Juliet to lead by his side.
CarolynneRuth chapter 6 . 7/21/2009
The plot thickens! I really like the direction you are taking with this. I am left wondering if Juliet and Sawyer can out manueve Ben? Not to mention trying to watch 50 people is going to be impossible. Things are bound to go wrong. I'm looking forward to see what happens next.
teh-Sara chapter 6 . 7/21/2009
Gah! It better be the pilot and not BOONE, but I'm sure it will be Boone because you said you'd kill someone else if a lot of people guessed right. Gr. I love this fic though! Can't wait for more!
CP3-Hornets chapter 6 . 7/21/2009
Yay! This update was great!

I say this every time, but I'm still amazed at how well you juggle all these different plot threads. Oh and the Locke/James conversation was awesome! And as usual, your Suliet scenes were fantastic!
Pegasus chapter 6 . 7/21/2009
Well I hope it's not Boone. I never thought his character was given the chance to really evolve, like they did with Charlie. A pretty good chapter and I hope there's an update soon.
Coconut1214 chapter 5 . 7/19/2009
I love seeing Sawyer running around trying to save everyone. Even Jack. lol

I'm glad he has Juliet to talk too, I think that's what he was missing in his life. Someone that understands him.

I have no idea who you killed. The Pilot?
Mad Steph chapter 5 . 7/19/2009

Oh NOES! Who did you kill? All we know is that it's a 'he', it could be anyone, Jack, the Marshall, the Pilot, Boone, Froghurt/Neil, Locke :'(

Loved the chapter though, and really enjoying this story!
Marla's Lost chapter 5 . 7/17/2009
good work - I love the new Sawyer, a wanna be hero who just wants to be with his sweetie!
Timeloopy chapter 5 . 7/17/2009
Ah, an interesting choice - thought you might be about to take Jack out there. I'm glad you didn't. I like Jack. I know who I think you're aiming your gun at but I won't say because I'd hate for you to change it. It's kind of wierd for Sawyer to be running around trying to save everyone but I'm sure he has it in him. . .maybe. . .don't make him too good - Sawyer isn't Sawyer without a little edge. . .Nice job. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
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