Wow, that was just beautifully written! Thank you so much for sharing it with us!

sg

oh! This was amazing!

hi, great way to end any episode of SMK ! I do like these tags and especially as there's no way Amanda would have been happy to go home and act 'normal' after the close call she would have needed the contact just as much as Lee..so glad you provided it,besides it's not as if she hadn't been out in her nightwear before and that was in daylight!Thanks for sharing this moment with us, always happy to feed my addiction!

Bernie

Nicely done - written in a simple but clearl style with well chosen descriptions. Bad Timing is up there amoungst my favs and this was a needed ending -

Charlie

Absolutely perfect. You are especially good at capturing Lee's character. You never make him try to say too much. You just portray him as the man of action/few words which is so Lee. Loved it.

Great story!

I loved this..." And then she did something she'd never done before. She stepped in close, looked into his eyes, and begged."

That line is the best!

*Sigh* What a wonderfully written piece. The story was sweet, funny, tender, romantic and so true to the characters!

You picked one of my top five all-time favorite SMK episodes, and you made it better. The ending soared, but before it took flight, it touched the pain and fear of facing loss.

I loved Amanda's theory that if she tapped lightly on his door, it would count as an effort to see him. I loved it even more when she removed her coat and suddenly she remembered that she was wearing her nightgown.

As usual, your descriptive phrases were beautiful. I was especially taken with "Instant flickered over to instant, like a silent movie in a thousand shades of gray."

Bravo!