Reviews for Take A Chance On Me
Atlaxxxx chapter 8 . 8/14/2009
I'm gonna die without the next chapter O.O

Plz update soon :]
emmettcullensvamp chapter 7 . 8/6/2009
Had to review again. This is supposed to be for Chapter 8 hah!

Is it me or someone else wants to fuck Edward's face up too?

He is such an asshole to have sex with Bella then go leave her naked in bed to pick Lauren up for lunch!

Who the hell does that?

Fantabulous writing(:

Please Please Please UPDATE!
paola2208 chapter 8 . 8/4/2009
Edward is an assward, but Bella is very stupid to have sex with him after all. She should make him jealous, feel miserable,and punch his face one more time!
babydolcullen chapter 8 . 8/4/2009
When she makes him realize her feelings, I hope he feels lower than dirt. I also hope she doesn't give into him just like that. Especially after fucking her all night & leaves her to be with , he is such a asshole! Why else would she sing the song with so much "conviction" & punch him & seem so angry & need a stress reliever by smoking. Dumbass, but, of course, I still love him. I know he will be wonderful in the end.
DennyRose chapter 8 . 8/4/2009
I loved everything about this chap... please post soon!
Ivygirl702 chapter 8 . 8/3/2009
Gah. Stupid Edward. It's pretty bad when James is the voice of reason. A high James at that... He's so so so stupid.

But, ya gotta love the girl for continuing to try. Love the trench coat.

Now, I can't wait for the chapter where Bella makes him realize everything. I hope it's soon. *hint, hint*.

Great update!
aeb12484 chapter 8 . 8/3/2009
I do believe that Edward has graduated from douche to scrote. And you get uber bonus points for the Framing Hanley reference. I love that band! Awesome chapter. i always love the chapters you put out! I am so excited for the next one _
vampiregurl chapter 8 . 8/3/2009
i'm so excited to see the next chapter and i can't wait. hopefully when she shows how much she loves him, edward will realise and totally regret it. but bella will be too heartbroken and stays away from him. but that's just my way of thinking. dunno about yours.
LoloD chapter 8 . 8/3/2009
Ok make lauren and edward can just fall down 4 flights of stairs for being such a douche to poor bella...( this ch. was short ( but it will keep me satisfied until the next time u post which i hope is soon ) but but can't you make bella make edward a lil bit more jealous i love it when that happens! anywho keep up the good work )
AmyLeeAddict16 chapter 8 . 8/3/2009
please please please update soon
LightBitterNess chapter 8 . 8/3/2009
that fucking asshole

I! want to punch HIM!

and screw his "pretty face" up *growling*
SilverFai chapter 8 . 8/3/2009
LOL! James was right, Edward is a tool...and a total idiot! Why can't he see that Lauren is using him? And yeah, Lauren was mean to him in high school so why would she be nice to him now that be looks good and is successful in life? I really want him to realize his feelings for Bella soon D: Right now he's a total loser for using and abusing his 'friendship' with her...Gawd..what and idiot!

Great chapter! Update soon!
pearlsnpolos16 chapter 8 . 8/3/2009
what. the. fuck. edward! gah he really pisses me off here. how is he gonna fuck bella and then go off to the bitch.. still love the story though. i wish he would just open his eyes and ditch the bitch and be with bella. can't wait to see what you've got planned
TwistedforTwilight chapter 8 . 8/3/2009
What a douche bag. How many chances is she going to give him? Bella better make him beg when he finally decides to get a clue.
emmettcullensvamp chapter 8 . 8/3/2009
OMC! I hate EDWARD right now!

What an asshole!

What is up with guys?

Fantastic story. CANNOT WAIT!

Please Please Please Update soon!
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