|Reviews for Take A Chance On Me|
| Entropic Kitten chapter 1 . 6/18/2009
I'm confused... Is Bella still a virgin cause she's holding out for Edward?
I know Eddie's a virgin cause you made him a dork. I'm glad it wasn't Tanya you made him all goo goo eyed over. I'd boycott your stories if it was. lol
| Ivygirl702 chapter 2 . 6/17/2009
It was good for me. ;)
I love David and have a feeling him and Alice are going to get along fine [if she's making an appearance]. And if she is, I can only imagine the sneaky sneaky ways the two combined will have to make sure Bella gets her man. Because Lauren can't have him.
Thanks for another great chapter!
| Freckles0628 chapter 2 . 6/17/2009
did he say no 2 Tanya?
isn't that the 'supposed' girl hes wants?
does Bella realize this?
| krissy chapter 2 . 6/17/2009
That was...well, you already know, you wrote it. Just to tell you, I HATE that song, 'wifey'? You've got to be kidding me. Rap is so pointless and brain corrupting. Okay, Ill stop with the rap flames. Update soon! :)
| krissy chapter 1 . 6/17/2009
Pretty cool so far. :)
| Bella Dazzles chapter 2 . 6/17/2009
Damn Girl! that's some mighty hott dancing you had goin on there...makes me wanna get all up on nerdy edwards junk too... ;)
| adrienne chapter 1 . 6/17/2009
oh lordy! i fucking love it! yayayyaa i like this bella! this edwardo makes me wanna kick him in the balls 4 times. i hope lauren breaks nerdwards heart into a thousand little tiny pieces that he can stick up his ass. hahaha. yay for bella swears-a-lot swan!
| erincassidy chapter 1 . 6/17/2009
So I've read a shit-ton of fanfic in the past month, but this is my first review. I really enjoyed your first chapter. Mouthy, angry Bella is super and who doesn't love a gay friend? So thank you for being a good writer, and now you should post the next chapter, no? I usually only read complete, so have some pity!
| Ivygirl702 chapter 1 . 6/17/2009
I like it. I love a snarky Bella and an Edward who isn't aware of just how hot he is. Can't wait to see how it all plays out.
| shoecraz chapter 1 . 6/17/2009
so what? he likes bella but wants lauern? what the hell. that is just messed up if you know what i mean .
| edwardrocksmysocks chapter 1 . 6/17/2009
I love it and I can't wait to read more! It looks like it's going to be such a great story!
| Bella Dazzles chapter 1 . 6/17/2009
ok...this is shaping up to be something good...now that i'm reviewing that means you get to update...:P
| Freckles0628 chapter 1 . 6/16/2009
aw. i luv it but i
HATE that Edward wants Lauren... I JUST THREW UP AT THE THOUGHT... y cant Edward see Bella for who she really is and just fucking FUCK her
| Mydnytwriter chapter 1 . 6/16/2009
I really like it... I cant wait to read more :D