Reviews for Zanzou
Khelek-sul Renai chapter 19 . 7/7/2013
There's an update... ...This hasn't been forgotten or abandoned. ... ... ... YAY! CELEBRATION TIME!

(I thought I'd alerted this; I'm glad I ran across it on a friend's favorites list, since I apparently had not...)


I love how you are doing all the fights, where the Genin are coming so close to defeat but are managing to rip victory (or at least survival) out of the opponents hand right at the last moments, and Kurenai manages to show off on the fly trap making skills against opponents that make the specialty that was all she was able or allowed to practice for years unusable.

I'm unable to decide if I feel slightly sorry or happily vindictive for Raiga. The last line of his fight makes me feel sad for him and Ranmaru, but his thoughts and actions before then had me cheering for a complete pride-breaking beat down.

That poison in Tenten had better not be fatal! Or she had better be cured soon. Three of the six Genin are out for the count, and Shino should be but somehow isn't; (Go Will of Fire!) he probably will be as soon as he has backup and can let himself fall without endangering any of the civilians. The last two... Aren't in much better condition. Well... This will be interesting if Gato has any more hired thugs around. At least Akumaru got rid of a good deal of the ones that did not go after Shino's position!

Well written. Good read. I can't wait to see what comes next.
The Laughing Phoenix chapter 19 . 7/3/2013
Further proof, as if we needed it, that Konoha's shinobi - and more specifically, Iruka's kids - are BADASS. I was so happy to see this fight sequence wrapping up, it was quite the wild ride. Whatever makes your muse tick, it's working like a charm!

notdakota chapter 19 . 7/1/2013
This is great. I discovered your writing just last night. I love the way you write, but sometimes it's a little difficult to tell where you change scenes.
Furionknight chapter 19 . 7/2/2013
I look forward to more :)
kurokazeryuu chapter 19 . 7/1/2013
Thanks for the update; although I literally thought this was dead but held some hope that on the off chance it'll get updated... Lo and behold, it did. But it's been so long, I've forgotten what this was about. I had to reread this, like from Shinkirou to now, again. When you take long breaks and do decide to update, please put in a recap to remind readers of where the story was left at.
Either way, looking foreward to the next update. Hopefully it won't take as long to update next time.
iNsAnE nO bAkA chapter 19 . 7/1/2013

I am so glad to see an update to this. c: I went back and re-read it cause it's been a while (whoot, re-read!) and it's as awesome as ever. The tension was high and I was all, kyaaa! What's gonna happen to them?! Lol, I can't wait to see what happens next!
jaz7 chapter 19 . 7/1/2013
cant wait until the next chapter!
x-smith chapter 19 . 7/1/2013
hi! welcome back! great chapter! i can't believe Tenten made the Demon Brothers kill each other! i think i'm gonna go back and read all 19 chapters again, it's been so long i don't know if i remeber what was going on outside of Wave. i can't wait to see what happens next! (not familier with that song, i may have to track it down)
DarkRavie chapter 19 . 7/1/2013
Great chapter! Love this story and I can't wait to read what happens next.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/21/2013
Is this fic dead? Pleeeeaaaaase don't let it be dead! It's so awesome! I wanna know what happens next!
GalanthaDreams chapter 18 . 4/24/2013
You have a real talent for balancing and connecting storylines.
Viviane Renard chapter 18 . 4/6/2013
This is a great sequel to a fantastic Konoha "what if" universe. There are a lot of moving pieces in this plot, with Konoha's forces spread thin, but I have faith that each team will find a way to succeed. I don't think they'll escape unscathed, but I'm hoping that there will be some sort of "happy end" for Konoha as a whole as the village starts to rebuild both its walls and relationships with its neighbors.

It's been a long time since you've updated this story, but I hope you find inspiration and continue this story. You left us at a very suspenseful moment, considering how poorly the fighting in Wave is fairing, and there's still the mystery of how Naruto, Sakura, and Sasuke plan on saving Gaara...and then Iruka and Shizune are dealing with politics and conspiracies on the home front. I really want to see how you wrap up all these plot threads.
GlitterVan chapter 7 . 2/28/2013
Is there a possibility of a IrukaxShizune? I hope iruka become a more major character and become stronger cuz technically skills wise he's stills genine
Guest chapter 18 . 1/25/2013
That was an awesome story, I hope that you finish it. I have to know what happens in suna.
I loved the first one and now this one too!
elisa chapter 18 . 10/29/2012
Can I be a minion?! 've always wanted to be a minion! And so far loving this series. Though I myst say I hate you for all of the cliffs... Not very fair to your loyal readers (which I have only recently become).
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