Reviews for Rainy Day Pervert
JaMisa27 chapter 1 . 6/20/2010
Your Senpai chapter 1 . 8/15/2009

interesting xD

maybe the last line instead of



"Yeah...I'd love to" or "Yeah...I'd like that"

just seems to fit the ending better
MusiqueAdmirer chapter 1 . 6/22/2009
I really don't know what to say...because I'm too preoccupied with laughing ;P

Well, I actually loved it a lot, and you expressed those ideas you were discussing with me exactly the way I had imagined it.

Great job!

However, I think you could elaborate on the part where naruto grabs hinata off the street in order to escape the two [wo]men.

I had to reread it because it moved in an instant and i didnt quite catch the way the plot moved until i reread it.

Just add a few more sentences there and Voila! Perfection ;D

Don't worry, I'm writing Requiem atm. Will be done soon~
SilentSinger948 chapter 1 . 6/21/2009
Great story. Excellent job.
jk chapter 1 . 6/19/2009
This ended up totally different than I expected. I love when stories do that. Thank you so much for a very cute read.
StagnantBrainMatter chapter 1 . 6/17/2009
haha wierd but funny...
Captain Kork chapter 1 . 6/17/2009
i can see hinata doing that for some reason... hmm
CherishedJanuaryAngel chapter 1 . 6/17/2009
What a sweet story. I couldn't help but smile the whole time I was reading it from beginning to end.

BTW is this a one shot or multichaptered.

If its multi chaptered I'll keep reading it. cuz I loved it alot.
Shubhs chapter 1 . 6/17/2009
LOVE the story!XP XD XP XD chapter 1 . 6/17/2009
Nice story very cute.
Jam Bread chapter 1 . 6/17/2009
Hehe~ Hinata is a pervet and it is raining. Cute, funny, sweet, and cute. I liked it~~