Reviews for For Your Eyes Only
MuggleCreator chapter 1 . 8/22/2012
Awwww... So sad... But hopeful too.
xThe Painted Lady chapter 1 . 8/16/2012
Oh my god...

I /almost/ cried. :P It doesn't happen often. But damn, this was SO sweet, but so sad... I loved it. Your writing is beautiful. I thought you used commas in places where they weren't really needed, though. They were slightly jarring, and some other things could've been fixed, but nothing really took away from this. It was still beautiful and I adored it. Lovely writing. :)
Analie Janes chapter 1 . 5/14/2011
This was beautiful and heart-breaking. Good job writing an angsty Teddy. The emotions are well written and I loved the diary entries. Brilliant story overall! :)

~Analie~
gracie474 chapter 1 . 6/3/2010
Ok..so this was beautiful! 3ed it! sso emotional and sweet. It totally expresses what teddy could be thinking! any way great job. Two-thumbs up! ~Gracie
AvidReaderAshley chapter 1 . 4/7/2010
This story made me sob like a little baby! Aw! Poor Teddy! The little thing at the end..."mum" that was so cute!
Cassandra30 chapter 1 . 8/6/2009
Excellent story. Poor Teddy. His pain ...
Fed up with this crap chapter 1 . 8/4/2009
Aw you should've added more between Andromeda and Teddy though. It's real nice though.
Fleur du Feu chapter 1 . 8/4/2009
This is beautiful. It's so emtional and touching, i actuly got tears in my eyes while reading it. Excellent job. One of the best one shots I've ever read.
TheSecretWeasley5147 chapter 1 . 7/16/2009
What a sweet little Tear-Jerker!
omnomnivore chapter 1 . 7/11/2009
You made me cry. I've always wondered what Teddy would've thought about Tonks and Remus and I like your way of putting it.
MBP chapter 1 . 7/5/2009
Teddy's crying; I'm crying; the whole world's crying. (I'm kind of glad my husband's asleep on the couch beside me now because otherwise I'd have to explain why I'm crying, and I couldn't possibly get words past this lump in my throat.) I love everything you write, but this - this - is a masterpiece. You've really captured what I think Teddy would have suffered and at exactly this age. It's really just brilliant.
goldengreaser chapter 1 . 7/2/2009
Awe. I should give Teddy a hug.
dahilsaiyo chapter 1 . 6/28/2009
I cried buckets. Oh Merlin! You do know how to write dramatic scenes!
Dodger Gilmore chapter 1 . 6/24/2009
This was a great idea for a oneshot. I could totally see that happening, both with Teddy's insecurities and then him finding that diary...

I might not be able to really see her sitting down to write in a diary when the battle was about to start and she had already decided she was going. In my head, she'd be more like either changing her mind back and forth in a diary, or she'd be off. But this story is much better this way, so it doesn't really matter.

I loved the way her words could make him understand how much he did mean to them, and that even if he freaked out about Remus leaving at first, it got cleared up. I can definitely see Andromeda not telling him that particular story about his parents...

Lovely work here!
emLILYEVANS chapter 1 . 6/21/2009
That was so good that made me cry! I loved it.
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