|Reviews for Jump in Time|
| Guest chapter 21 . 9/28
Does that mean Arthur made out with one of his descendants? Dude! Not cool!
(Am enjoying the story)
| elijahlover chapter 26 . 11/11/2014
I really love it but can you write an epilogue of Merlin meeting little Arthur? X
| cindy4651 chapter 26 . 6/8/2014
It was wonderful, thanks. I'm sad that there was no reveal, I can only assume that it happened later. And I wish Pippa would have an explanation for Ellie's sudden change in circumstances. But well-written, with a good idea and excellent sentence structure and grammar. I'm looking forward to reading mor of what you've written.
| cindy4651 chapter 23 . 6/8/2014
I'm glad Arthur is upset about the uneaten deer. And shocked when he asked Ellie if they could please keep hunting. And confused about why Merlin wasn't in the legend/history books, too old and wizardy, I guess. And dad who figured out who Merlin was, was awesome - how could he possibly let Merlin get away and go to sleep?
| cindy4651 chapter 22 . 6/8/2014
| cindy4651 chapter 20 . 6/7/2014
Excellent chapter, but I can't imagine Arthur would be able to spend hours looking at Arthurian legends and not learn about Merlin.
| cindy4651 chapter 17 . 6/7/2014
That's my spell book - fantastic!
| cindy4651 chapter 15 . 6/6/2014
Very nice. I like the Merlin chapters better than the Arthur chapters, perhaps because I like Nick and Pippa better. Thanks so much for writing this!
| cindy4651 chapter 14 . 6/6/2014
Shopping scares me too. Arthur's right.
| cindy4651 chapter 13 . 6/6/2014
Nooooo! Merlin wouldn't cheat at cards! He cheated at dice but Arthur deserved it!
| cindy4651 chapter 10 . 6/6/2014
Yay Arthur for finally being useful!
| cindy4651 chapter 9 . 6/6/2014
I love your Merlin reading Harry Potter!
| cindy4651 chapter 7 . 6/6/2014
I love the way you have Merlin analyzing so well and figuring out so much by watching and thinking.
| cindy4651 chapter 6 . 6/6/2014
I'm really wondering how you're going to get our time travelers together and home!
| cindy4651 chapter 2 . 6/6/2014
Poor Arthur is having a really tough day!