Reviews for Defining Destiny
maryanneryder chapter 10 . 6/24/2014
I'm only 10 chapters in and already I love this story it is so addictive I literally can't stop reading it. Really great job
Eli42 chapter 30 . 6/29/2013
Great Fic!
Ellie x chapter 30 . 10/28/2012
Did anyone end up imprinting on Sue?
mammabear06 chapter 29 . 4/5/2012
Great story.
amsftwilight chapter 30 . 11/5/2011
awesome story it was really well written except some parts where you explained pairings got really confusing lol but thats okay. Amazing story and a great read because i couldn't stop until i finished.
Aigoo chapter 30 . 4/18/2011
It was really great ! I loved it !
Natalie chapter 9 . 2/13/2011
OMG loved Kim & Emily explaining the wolf sex part lmao very well thought out :) brilliant writing so far I'm loving this story xx
ebdarcy.qt4good chapter 30 . 12/31/2010
Cute story!

Just a note: the contraceptive item you mentioned in a few different chapters is spelled as "condom", not "condemn". To condemn is to show strong disapproval of something.
ebdarcy.qt4good chapter 20 . 12/31/2010
Good story so far! :) One typo I noticed (well, less a typo and more wrong word being used a couple of times):

"You aren't aloud to go romping around like nothing is happening!"

I think you meant the word "allowed" instead of "aloud", lol. To allow something means to give permission for it or admit it. Aloud, on the other hand, menas to say something out loud or vocally.

You repeated this error in Rachel's response to that sentence.

That's all.. back to reading now :)! Keep up the great work!
Kylahgk chapter 8 . 7/26/2010
There is soooo other vegatables that have seeds!

1. cucumbers!

2. peas!

3. avacado (i think that is a vatable


5. pickles!

an there is more cuz vegatbles grow from seeds and you need seeds from that plant to grow more!
myoung228 chapter 30 . 7/18/2010
laurazuleta18 chapter 30 . 7/17/2010
Loved it

So cute

Totally loved it!

This was such an amazing fic

And totally loved ending, only them would want to have sex just after she gave birth!

Loved chica, ur such an amazing writter!

Btw got any new fics on mind?
Aramoorn chapter 29 . 7/8/2010
awwwwww, I love it! Its so sad that I just found it in time for the end! Great job!
laurazuleta18 chapter 29 . 7/7/2010
Awwwnn lovd it!

So cute

I love that it was so original that they didn't have a reception... Lol

Love All the pack kids! 3

can't believe it's just one chap left... This was such an amazing fic

Totally love it!

I really hope that u have been feeling better bb, all the best wishes for you amiga... Ttyl

megs was here chapter 29 . 7/7/2010
i love how they did it on her birthday

what took them so long?

well, i guess whenever the pack is envolved, there is a lot of drama... A LOTT!

marie sounds like a cutie

awwww its almost over!

oh noo!

i understand how it's your baby!

but hey, you can always have another

rachel is pregos again?


i cant wait for the update

until next time :D
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