|Reviews for Lillia and Treize, The Lake of Three Kings|
| becket chapter 1 . 1/22/2011
very good :)
| Ducks-Go-Aflack chapter 1 . 1/2/2011
Much better than the last two. There was action in this one, but not a significant amount. These stories have been sort of short. It feels like you are continuing the Anime/Book in episodic format. There's nothing wrong for this, but it does leave less room for character development. Speaking of which, L/T's interactions and bantering are starting to repeat. Try developing their relationship further, and putting in some tension. They seemed too perfect in this fic. Stagnant characters are the worst. BTW, you missed a golden opportunity when L was 'killed' for T to go into deep, yet temporary, despair. T could have a 'You don't what you had till it's gone' moment, or something like that. Just an idea.
Keep up the good work,
| verynew chapter 1 . 1/5/2010
Great style, author is real master. I'm out of words to describe this - "MUST READ" isn't good enough.