Beautiful, you are a great storyteller and I am loving your version of atla. can't wait for whats to come.

This is amazing!
Hope you keep going.
Can’t WAIT to read more!

This chapter is brilliant!
I have loved the entire story so far ️. I also love the way the Zuko’s personal story is tying in with the GAangs.
Hope we get to see some Mai & Ty Lee rebellion!
You’re doing great

Sad this story is dead

how the hell is sokka gonna kill zuko? is katara stupid?

GOD this is so good and emotional!

This has been epic. I thank you for it.
I do have an account, saaaaammmmeee name, but my phone won't let me log in...

This fic was such interesting and engaging look at the ATLA world in a darker shade. The characters were well written and honestly I just enjoyed your writing style as a whole. Of course I would have hoped you continued it, but what you did share was really well done and I appreciate the chance to read it

Characters' personalities tend to get jumbled and lost in fanfiction so I'm super impressed that I was able to really recognise them for who they were throughout the story. Thanks for what you wrote and hope you're doing well :D

This is by far the best fanfic I’ve ever read. I hope you keep writing, because this is seriously amazing.

Oh I liked Kai, he's rad as hell. Great descriptions

Honestly, it's a shame this story isn't continued, but I really loved reading it! Zuko just makes my heart hurt, and I love how you characterised him. Hope you're doing well :)

Yaaaay! So good! Because it’s been 10 years since you updated, I assume you’re either D or D (dead or disinterested). However, if you’re still reading reviews, please know that this is one if the best AtLA fics I’ve read and I really enjoyed it. Also, based on your author’s comments, I think we have very similar personalities. Please PM me if you ever want to brainstorm!

The only thing I would beg you to do is PLEASE go back and update your story to have section breaks. I know FFnet tends to annihilate line breaks, so maybe just a character or two between the lines would help tremendously. It’s really frustrating to het halfway through a paragraph and realize that the POV has changed, especially in chapters with multiple scene breaks.

Where to start. Obviously, it’s been almost ten years since you finished this story. I’d just like to say that this is one of the best fanfics, scratch that, stories I’ve ever read. I do not exaggerate on that. Your grasp on character development and psychology is one to be envied. (It is, by me!)
I don’t quite know how to express how much I love your writing in this story. It’s astounding, how well you weaved everything. I’d just like to say this, I hope you’ve had a good ten years, and thank you so much for sharing this story with us :)