|Reviews for Neither Red nor Dead|
| Great Thumbs of Wisdom chapter 1 . 7/21/2009
I loved this, very well written. I've been wanting to write my own Red Faction: Guerrilla fanfiction for a while, so I think I'll do it now.
Again, very good job. The one big problem was the sentence structure. It was clunky, and seemed amatuerish at parts. But not too bad.
| Innocent Fox chapter 1 . 6/19/2009
Well...it's unlikely, Red Faction Guerrilla takes place in 2125, and this is set in 2194. I might play around with Mason's family tree though.
| bdun chapter 1 . 6/19/2009
oh HELL YEAH! judging from the last sentience (and the title) he will be going up against red faction AND the EDF. is he going to cross paths with mason or something?