|Reviews for Forbidden Fruit|
| ABlinkOfTheEye chapter 1 . 7/6/2009
That was good. I totally thought it was Edward until you metioned him being on her arm. Your good. ]]
| ParamoreTwilight.fan chapter 1 . 6/27/2009
oh this is good! i like it. good luck for the awards
| OldLenn chapter 1 . 6/24/2009
Aw, poor Jake! I honestly thought that was Edward in the beginning until the end of the story came.
Great job, and good luck on the contest!
| Silence Means Everything chapter 1 . 6/23/2009
I like this one alot, it is different Ive never read a fan fiction like this before
| TRDancer chapter 1 . 6/20/2009
Aw, poor Jacob. That was a great one-shot! Good job and good luck! :D
| 11232637484929 chapter 1 . 6/17/2009
That was cute! Haha, Jacob...
| anythingzombie chapter 1 . 6/17/2009
This is oh so cute.
It's a little not in the rules, but I'll still put it up.
:) Thanks for participating.