Reviews for Forbidden Fruit
ABlinkOfTheEye chapter 1 . 7/6/2009
That was good. I totally thought it was Edward until you metioned him being on her arm. Your good. ]] chapter 1 . 6/27/2009
oh this is good! i like it. good luck for the awards
OldLenn chapter 1 . 6/24/2009
Aw, poor Jake! I honestly thought that was Edward in the beginning until the end of the story came.

Great job, and good luck on the contest!

Silence Means Everything chapter 1 . 6/23/2009
I like this one alot, it is different Ive never read a fan fiction like this before
TRDancer chapter 1 . 6/20/2009
Aw, poor Jacob. That was a great one-shot! Good job and good luck! :D
11232637484929 chapter 1 . 6/17/2009
That was cute! Haha, Jacob...
anythingzombie chapter 1 . 6/17/2009
This is oh so cute.


It's a little not in the rules, but I'll still put it up.

:) Thanks for participating.