|Reviews for Forte Gaiden|
| Blood Drenched Scorpion chapter 1 . 6/5/2010
Canon plot-like gives me no surprise. I hope theres something new next chapter. Update soon.
| Ai Star chapter 1 . 12/10/2009
poor guy not even he deserved that keep up the good work! update soon! W
| GrimMoody chapter 1 . 6/17/2009
It's okay. I think you make Forte a little too violent. And it's pretty gross that he uses his mouth for that...ew. But it's got good spelling/grammar, which is always helpful. I dunno though, you could use a little more detail when you're describing surroundings, especially in the flashback. But a good start, and it should be interesting to see where this goes.