What a wonderful and unusual story! I was torn between wanting Darcy to stay in the reality he missed with those precious kids and wanting him to have the reality you gave them at the end, where he would not have to miss one minute of his life with Elizabeth and their children. :)

Amazing story

intressting bigining i love the movie and jane austins books :)

Ohhh so many feelings! I almost didn't read this story because I knew it would wreak emotional turmoil upon my heart (and it definitely did) but it made it all better at the end, yay! And in a plausible, not-rushed way. Loved it. A lot.

I loved it! Creative plot - especially for P&P. I get bored of the same old canon-story-line in a new setting, so this was SUCH a nice surprise.

omg. That was ridiculously cute. And I'm still half convinced that Will doesn't deserve Lizzy, but I'm sure my conflicting emotions will work themselves out ;)

Very sweet.

This was fantastic...I just love the whole...idk..how to explain it..but you're writing has such a light feeling toward it that its like I'm watching an Abc family movie ( my fav! )..this story was brilliantly put together. ..the ending was hilarious

Yes!..yay. me! ...I totally got your hint in zthe other chapter wen u said all of a sudden Elizabeth changed her mind ...begging for him to stay with her...Omg...now I'm afraid of the ending...will he go back to his life as a wallstreet em guy...or his twenty year old self...oh the agony of waiting...lol ..fab chapter!

I loved this, I just want more of it! Read this whole story in one afternoon!

Very cute story! I like that Darcy wasn't instantly at ease shot into a life he didn't remember at all

Fan-freakin-tastic! This story is the perfect mix of humor, angst, and romance. Your plot is original, which I definitely respect. You write the characters so well, especially uber-sarcastic Lizzy. The ending was perfect... Jules likes to show up in the most unlikely places. Wonderful job!

Aw yay :) I love your writing and other stories, so I had to come back and read this one. To be honest, I was always angry at the movie (Family Man, that is) because I *do* think it's unfair to screw with someone's life like that, movie or not, but I appreciated that you addressed that. Also, I really liked that we got to see Will pursue her and then see a bit of their life together. I'm not gonna lie though, I would *so* lovely a fluffy follow up. Anyway, as always, really awesome story, you can write, girl!

OMG. I love it. I gotta wonder though if you based the dream Lizzy on Lorelai Gilmore from Gilmore Girls. That's who she totally reminded me of. Oh. And you forgot about Kitty. But other than that, I adored it.

So i'm re-reading this story (again) and I've just got to say that this chapter is so heartwrenchingly sad I feel like (metaphorically) dying in a hole every time I read it...very nice job :'-)