MC got mindfucked. Not interesting. Screw this.

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You know after reading all these reviews people forget that this us fan fiction a.k.a. a story made up by a fan so you can put whatever power scale, bullshit or whatever you want honestly

Where is the sequel?

I honestly was very young when I first found this story and I have to say this was one of the best out there at the time, I honestly hate the way some of the fans don't support the bleach writers like the Naruto and Pokemon fandom supports their writers stories, the bleach fandom just never tries to let the writers improve before judging the story,

Man I miss stories like this one, now All we have are the Ichi/rukia and Ichi/hime story to survive off hardly any odd Ichigo stories worth reading.

Man at this point I'd like to challenge any writer out there to make a story worth reading! How about a Ichigo/Isane/X where instead of a human Ichigo is a full time soul reaper that goes through the academy an moves up the ranks

the only one who can tell you what to do is yourself dont let others try to force u to do something you dont want to do

this story is an old classic as far as im concerned dog i read this shit when i was like 15 and now i feel OLD AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

love it or hate it
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If you don't cringe you did something wrong

Good to hear you're doing well. Hope you had fun anyways.

In conclusion... It's honestly a decent fanfic if you read it without expectations. That's is probably the only way to read it cause if I didn't I would've dropped it the moment that replica of White started taking powers for whatever reason.

There is a bunch of stuff that personally annoyed and irked me but ignoring them, there wasn't any real issues I had with it. Besides maybe a few grammar and spelling errors I guess. If ya wanna call those issues.

I actually binged through it over night. So even if I had problems, there's something about it that is interesting. I think I'd recommend it to people who just want to turn their brain off and relax. Whether that's an insult or a compliment, I'll just leave that up for interpretation.

Something about this chapter ruined this whole fanfic for me. Something... Just a liiiiittle something about it. Perhaps it was... Whatever bullshit nonsense the last sentence I just read was.

So it did end up in a fight.

... well that was expected / unexpected. I thought up of several possible outcomes and this was one of them but didn't think it'd happen so soon. Was actually expecting a bit of a Ichigo vs. Yamamoto fight.

Unless Ichigo is fully aware that Aizen is aware of the plan and of what's-his-face's betrayal, there should be no reason that we are getting Aizen's P.O.V. All this shit said in all of his P.O.V.'s should've been revealed later. Like at the end of the war.