|Reviews for Disciplined Breakdown|
| Pagemistress89 chapter 13 . 9/26/2010
So, I was reading your fic on a whim, thinking 'oh, I'll just read the first chapter, and then I'll move on'. An hour latr I came to myself and was horrified to realize that I had reached the end of the fic so far. And just when Edward was finally conquering her and Bella was finally opening up to him! What's with that? Why isn't there more? I need more! Please, please, please update! Soon! Very soon! As soon as you get this review! Please!
| rebelwithoutacauselolxx chapter 13 . 9/20/2010
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE put up the next chappie
You had me right in the palm of your hand the entire time and I need another dose of Disciplined Breakdown :)
| reesessweetie chapter 13 . 8/19/2010
this chapter made me cry... poor bella, having to go through that. she was soo smart for hiding herself from the invaders... so brave for not making a sound at all... i don't think i can forgive her mother though..what kind of mom leaves her daughter like that and doesn't even let the babysitter know that she's not going to be home when she said she would. and she wasn't off just by hours, but by DAYS. what in the world is wrong with her? she was probably cheating on charlie with another man... arghghgh... i get soo mad for bella just thinking about it. the poor thing...
| reesessweetie chapter 12 . 8/19/2010
i kind of like that edward and bella are both serious runners. they can start runnign together all the time now! i always hated that bella used running as an escape but now, with edward running beside her, it can be a normal, healthy activity to do with a lover rather than a way to run away from problems
| reesessweetie chapter 11 . 8/19/2010
i wonder why renee left her only daughter. why bella seems to hate her mother so much...she probably left charlie for phil... but still, even if you leave your husband, you don't leave your child.
| reesessweetie chapter 10 . 8/19/2010
i can't wait for bella to finaly break out of her shell and finally allow herself to LIVE. so far, she's only existed... edward and alice are doing a fine job at helping her but she needs to do the rest on her own.
| reesessweetie chapter 9 . 8/19/2010
i really want bella and edward to be happy together...and then they can show charlie and renee how loving parents are supposed to act when they finally settle down and have kids. yeah, i'm kind of thinkign really far ahead in teh future, but i like imagining their future togther
| reesessweetie chapter 8 . 8/19/2010
i actually have hope for charlie to redeem himself though..i think that's where you plan for thiings to go in the story.. maybe charlie has only been lashing out at bella becuase of his own loneliness and pain. pain in losing a wife, and now, in losing his only daughter. and he probably also feels guilt too, for driving away his wife and the mother of his child... (if that's what happened).. but still, i can't get over the fact that just when bella is starting to enjoy herself again, he reprimands her for being inappropriate and for giving the company a bad name...
| reesessweetie chapter 7 . 8/19/2010
i have given up hope on charlie. and renee also, though i don't even really know her story... i hope that you will include more of the cullens in here.. maybe carlisle and esme will be like the warm and loving and caring parents she never had? they can replace that empty hole in her heart where a parent should be... (and then, make charlie regret treating her the way he has been all these years)
| reesessweetie chapter 6 . 8/19/2010
i am really glad that bella has such a good friend in alice. she really is the best girlfriend a person can have. these two are each other's only family. charlie definitely doesn't fit into that category right now, not with the way he treats her and belittles her
| reesessweetie chapter 5 . 8/19/2010
i really hope that bella will be able to prove charlie wrong. i hate that he wanted her to give the cullen account to mike newton. arghghg... i can't wait for her to leave her father's company and come work for the cullens. it's about time she seeks out her own happiness. being at that place is slowly killing her. always being doubted by her own father, having to hateful and malicious words from jessica all the time, and the harassment from mike... she can definitely do much better for herself. that's what i can't wait to read! the day for her to finally leave her father's business
| reesessweetie chapter 4 . 8/19/2010
i really don't understand what charlie's problem with bella is. why isn't she ever good enough for him? why won't he allow her to let loose and relax? does he really care about his company much more than his own daughter? why doens't he have faith in her abilities?
| reesessweetie chapter 3 . 8/19/2010
bella is such an odd creature, full of so many contrasts. she has a high power career, is successful and beatiful, but she is soo insecure. people like jessica makes her feel bad about herself when jessica isn't as nearly as powerful as her in the company...
| reesessweetie chapter 2 . 8/19/2010
i really feel sorry for bella. she's soo closed off, so isolated. she has such a determination to succeed that she has ignored her other needs, such as that of companionship and having fun.
| reesessweetie chapter 1 . 8/19/2010
i see that it's been quite a while since you've updated.. please don't drop this story. it's soo freakin good! and we all can't wait to see the changes edward will bring out in bella