Reviews for Disciplined Breakdown
reesessweetie chapter 9 . 8/19/2010
i really want bella and edward to be happy together...and then they can show charlie and renee how loving parents are supposed to act when they finally settle down and have kids. yeah, i'm kind of thinkign really far ahead in teh future, but i like imagining their future togther
reesessweetie chapter 8 . 8/19/2010
i actually have hope for charlie to redeem himself though..i think that's where you plan for thiings to go in the story.. maybe charlie has only been lashing out at bella becuase of his own loneliness and pain. pain in losing a wife, and now, in losing his only daughter. and he probably also feels guilt too, for driving away his wife and the mother of his child... (if that's what happened).. but still, i can't get over the fact that just when bella is starting to enjoy herself again, he reprimands her for being inappropriate and for giving the company a bad name...
reesessweetie chapter 7 . 8/19/2010
i have given up hope on charlie. and renee also, though i don't even really know her story... i hope that you will include more of the cullens in here.. maybe carlisle and esme will be like the warm and loving and caring parents she never had? they can replace that empty hole in her heart where a parent should be... (and then, make charlie regret treating her the way he has been all these years)
reesessweetie chapter 6 . 8/19/2010
i am really glad that bella has such a good friend in alice. she really is the best girlfriend a person can have. these two are each other's only family. charlie definitely doesn't fit into that category right now, not with the way he treats her and belittles her
reesessweetie chapter 5 . 8/19/2010
i really hope that bella will be able to prove charlie wrong. i hate that he wanted her to give the cullen account to mike newton. arghghg... i can't wait for her to leave her father's company and come work for the cullens. it's about time she seeks out her own happiness. being at that place is slowly killing her. always being doubted by her own father, having to hateful and malicious words from jessica all the time, and the harassment from mike... she can definitely do much better for herself. that's what i can't wait to read! the day for her to finally leave her father's business
reesessweetie chapter 4 . 8/19/2010
i really don't understand what charlie's problem with bella is. why isn't she ever good enough for him? why won't he allow her to let loose and relax? does he really care about his company much more than his own daughter? why doens't he have faith in her abilities?
reesessweetie chapter 3 . 8/19/2010
bella is such an odd creature, full of so many contrasts. she has a high power career, is successful and beatiful, but she is soo insecure. people like jessica makes her feel bad about herself when jessica isn't as nearly as powerful as her in the company...
reesessweetie chapter 2 . 8/19/2010
i really feel sorry for bella. she's soo closed off, so isolated. she has such a determination to succeed that she has ignored her other needs, such as that of companionship and having fun.
reesessweetie chapter 1 . 8/19/2010
i see that it's been quite a while since you've updated.. please don't drop this story. it's soo freakin good! and we all can't wait to see the changes edward will bring out in bella
Fitten chapter 13 . 7/13/2010
i didn't know snuggling on the couch could be so...hot...
Fitten chapter 10 . 7/13/2010
aw chickenshit Bella...
Fitten chapter 9 . 7/13/2010
oh thank god he caught her and that she asked about jessica. love your story! can't believe you have so few reviews...probably everyone's so keen on reading the next chapter they don't have time t review each one...my excuse...
Fitten chapter 7 . 7/13/2010
she has it soooo bad. poor girl. mike's the snitch i'll bet.
Fitten chapter 2 . 7/13/2010
Not that I noticed him or anything. Or thought about him much. Or had memorized his resume.

oh yeah right! me neither!

Charlie's awful.
petrarch72 chapter 13 . 7/11/2010
I don't usually resort to begging but please please please finish this fic. It's too good not to be completed. After 6 month I'm not sure if you are planning on continuing. Please let us know!
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