Reviews for Beneath A Smile
uchihacutie chapter 1 . 9/13/2009
So cute _
angelovelies chapter 1 . 8/14/2009
simply lovely. :) but why was this M ? haha ..
mom calling chapter 1 . 7/14/2009
I like. I prefer Cloti, but Reno's cool if there's a good reason that Cloud's outta the picture... but I'll read anything ff7 if it's well done-well, pretty much anything. I see you are a person and I'm surprised because I see Sacred & Profane lots of places ('this is for S&P') in more than one story, and assumed you were a community. If pressed, I would have said a cloistered community, and when I see how many things you have written (275 stories), perhaps you are cloistered and tied to your computer or quill... anyway I have time and coffee so I'm gonna see what it is that you do... thx mc
koalababay chapter 1 . 6/27/2009
Oh my god. This was seriously the most beautiful ReTi that you've ever written! Don't tell anyone...but I have a few tears threatening to reveal themselves! '] This was so good and I love how you wrote this in first person. It's the first one of yours from that POV that I've read and it was amazing! You had their personalities and emotions down perfectly. I just...Wow!
always-kh chapter 1 . 6/22/2009
*squeals* aww it was so cute and still seemed pretty in character. nice fic good amount of romance their and i liked it from his pov.
BlackxValentine chapter 1 . 6/21/2009
AW

*hugs Reno and Tifa*

They are so cute together.
QueenAlla chapter 1 . 6/19/2009
gray haired mommas boys! Lol!

That was really sweet...loved all the stuff about Tifa's smile and the ending was pretty much perfect. Great job.
SeungSeiRan chapter 1 . 6/19/2009
Concrit:

'When applied to it's extreme...' - replace it's with its. It's is only used to shorten it is. Its is used to indicate otherwise.

Still, this fic has got to be one of my faves of yours. Really gentle and sweet with some great lines. Particularly:

' You could power cities with that smile, it was that damn bright.'

Wonderful :)
UnchartedHeart chapter 1 . 6/18/2009
To quote you from earlier: OH MAI GAWD,lol. It was really touching and I loved everything about it. You did an outstanding job on this.
fire mystic chapter 1 . 6/18/2009
Oh, you are so good. That was awesome, and exactly what I was asking for. I knew the first person pov would be perfect; so glad you went with it! And, again, all the little tie-ins you know I love, and just a bit more about those scars. Excellent! And I can't tell you exactly why, but I love the way you tied up the ending, especially from his not writing "any damn poetry"! Thanks so much for another wonderful story!
Bluejay917 chapter 1 . 6/18/2009
YAY I love Reno's POV on this story.

Wonderful job.

So sweet. _
Speedy Speck chapter 1 . 6/18/2009
This was fantastic! 'gray haired mommas boys' - very much made me laugh! The rest was really sweet, and it was nice to see that insight, lovely ending too! Keep up the great work XD