Reviews for Moonfire
sarahmicaela88 chapter 5 . 12/18/2016
Yes she will cause shes Bea. No one knws how to fuck up and fuck with people in the most sadistic way possible like her. Especially the one in this story. She judges Leah for being a bitch and making others miserable. Well sweetheart guess what? Ur not any better cause you cant decide what the fuck u want. And when u seem to be making progress of moving forward. U manage to fuck shit up even worse than before. And poor Jake is ur own personal punching bag. And u seem to enjoy every blow u give him.
sarahmicaela88 chapter 4 . 12/18/2016
The biggest cockblocker is Quil. How he's still alive I dont knw.
sarahmicaela88 chapter 9 . 12/18/2016
Dont wanna hate but Jake should've never come back. Bea doesnt deserve him. She's such a bitch who doesnt knw whats good for her. Even if it was a ruse that was sadistic and cruel.
sarahmicaela88 chapter 3 . 12/18/2016
Seriously I just wanna slap this girl and tell her get the fuck over it already.
sarahmicaela88 chapter 2 . 12/18/2016
Sorry but its kinda hard to feel sympathy for Bea cause she did do that. And it was because of what Leah said. Was it tactful, not exactly. But Bea keeps herself in that misery because she wants to. If she wants people to stop talking shit then she needs to grow a fucking spine, get over herself cause she's not the first one to go through a heartbreak, and just the fuck on. Leah maybe even did her huge favor here.
sarahmicaela88 chapter 1 . 12/18/2016
Oh God I just wanna tell her shut the fuck up. You're in love with someone that left for dead in the middle of the woods that split months ago and left you comatose. Yeah he sounds like a real winner. I could see why you would hold a candle to him.
moraine9 chapter 9 . 11/20/2016
That was damn sexy, thanks for the great story!
alh1971 chapter 9 . 10/7/2016
Great job. Loved it.
Guest chapter 2 . 8/17/2016
While I do like your story, I got to admit the whole Leah being a bitch and her own pack being assholes is a bit played out. But I'm still interested to see how you you play it out
Nargles Inspector chapter 9 . 4/14/2016
this was such a sweet story! I love happy endings
4Gracie04 chapter 9 . 2/22/2016
Loved it!
aaa chapter 9 . 10/27/2015
bella a lo largo de tu historia fue una perra total , y jake fue pisoteado hasta el cansancio nunca saco carácter .
el final fue una total mierda
Chameleonxx chapter 9 . 7/8/2015
That was INCREDDDIBLY PERFECT!
Novel's addict chapter 9 . 7/1/2015
This was so so good i wish there was more. I loveed it a lot :)
guest chapter 1 . 5/27/2015
Best story Ive read.
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