|Reviews for Phantom Powers|
| Phoenix2889 chapter 5 . 9/10/2009
I like the story so far keep up the good work :)
| The Duelist's Heiress chapter 3 . 7/22/2009
I liked this. Sorry for the late review.
| sweet.red.berries chapter 3 . 7/19/2009
And good job with the shorter paragraphs. It's much easier to read now.
Please update soon!
| Cster chapter 2 . 6/26/2009
I loved the prequel. Nice start for the sequel.
| sweet.red.berries chapter 2 . 6/25/2009
Aww... It's really sweet that Seto and Kaito are going with Anzu.
Great chapter! Please update soon!
| sweet.red.berries chapter 1 . 6/25/2009
Yay! You wrote a sequel!
I loved the beginning part about Kaito.
Hmm... Kaiba Corp. is going to make clothes? Interesting...
Excellent story! Did you write in English, or did you translate it? Either way, you are an amazing writer! I couldn't see grammar mistakes or anything.
However, I would suggest breaking up your paragraphs. It is a bit hard to read when the story is in big paragraphs.
Anyways, I love your story so far!
Keep up the good work, and please update soon!
| deactivated loser account chapter 2 . 6/21/2009
I like your story so far
sorry for not reviewing earlier, but I had to go so I just subscribed to it and left. I didn't have internet for a while so now I can finally review
I like the idea of them all going to Japan, and I couldn't find grammar mistakes or anything
The only thing I suggest changing is the paragraph structure
It's hard to read if you see a huge paragraph infront of you and the subject changes even if you don't put a new paragraph
Try putting dialogue in a new paragraph and try to describe the way they say it sometimes
That's it I guess
I your story so far though
good luck with the rest of it
| The Duelist's Heiress chapter 2 . 6/20/2009
That was great. I liked it.
| The Duelist's Heiress chapter 1 . 6/18/2009
Is it a problem if I haven't read the prequel? It looks great!