Reviews for Phantom Powers
Phoenix2889 chapter 5 . 9/10/2009
I like the story so far keep up the good work :)
The Duelist's Heiress chapter 3 . 7/22/2009
I liked this. Sorry for the late review.

TDH chapter 3 . 7/19/2009
Great chapter!

And good job with the shorter paragraphs. It's much easier to read now.

Please update soon!
Cster chapter 2 . 6/26/2009
I loved the prequel. Nice start for the sequel. chapter 2 . 6/25/2009
Aww... It's really sweet that Seto and Kaito are going with Anzu.

Great chapter! Please update soon! chapter 1 . 6/25/2009
Yay! You wrote a sequel!

I loved the beginning part about Kaito.

Hmm... Kaiba Corp. is going to make clothes? Interesting...

Excellent story! Did you write in English, or did you translate it? Either way, you are an amazing writer! I couldn't see grammar mistakes or anything.

However, I would suggest breaking up your paragraphs. It is a bit hard to read when the story is in big paragraphs.

Anyways, I love your story so far!

Keep up the good work, and please update soon!
deactivated loser account chapter 2 . 6/21/2009
I like your story so far

sorry for not reviewing earlier, but I had to go so I just subscribed to it and left. I didn't have internet for a while so now I can finally review

I like the idea of them all going to Japan, and I couldn't find grammar mistakes or anything

The only thing I suggest changing is the paragraph structure

It's hard to read if you see a huge paragraph infront of you and the subject changes even if you don't put a new paragraph

Try putting dialogue in a new paragraph and try to describe the way they say it sometimes

That's it I guess

I your story so far though

good luck with the rest of it
The Duelist's Heiress chapter 2 . 6/20/2009

That was great. I liked it.

The Duelist's Heiress chapter 1 . 6/18/2009
Is it a problem if I haven't read the prequel? It looks great!