Reviews for Payback
vampiregirl9705 chapter 2 . 10/7/2012
Let me just say...WOW
black wolf is cole chapter 1 . 8/18/2011
Who doesnt enjoy a little comedy while it was still sweet :) great work!
kerryx chapter 2 . 11/22/2010
Absolutely love it - r u goin to write anymore chapters? X
Godschildtweety chapter 2 . 9/1/2010
That was hot beyond words
TwiTrinity chapter 2 . 8/23/2010
ok that was seriously fuckin HOT AS FUCK
motherduckatschool chapter 2 . 7/26/2010
Loved it.

Keep writing,

Motherduckatschool
bananasrgood chapter 2 . 7/21/2010
i love post-breaking dawn stories that are written the RIGHT way. and this one is!

usually people leave out nessie, or make all the vamps human, or forget that bella can let down her sheild so edward hears her!

but u DIDNT, and i freaking love that about this story

lehh go :P

write me backkkk please :)
bananasrgood chapter 1 . 7/21/2010
What edward did really wasnt that wrongg...

bella must reallyyy have a short temper or somethin!

i love love loveeeeeeeee how u wrote the story
twilight37 chapter 2 . 3/19/2010
haha, love it
REDlikesBLACK chapter 2 . 3/14/2010
good job on that.
rdrumm5 chapter 2 . 2/17/2010
Great story
i-kno-you-want-me chapter 2 . 11/24/2009
very clever very clever indeed
spartangirl03 chapter 2 . 10/10/2009
Great lemon. ...very aggressive and passionate. ..love ur story!
little miss chapter 2 . 9/15/2009
PLEASE CONTINUE!

thats was great!
Twilight's evil Pixie chapter 2 . 8/25/2009
Excellent writing. A side of the two characters i would never have even thought could have been there. Well done
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