|Reviews for Payback|
| vampiregirl9705 chapter 2 . 10/7/2012
Let me just say...WOW
| black wolf is cole chapter 1 . 8/18/2011
Who doesnt enjoy a little comedy while it was still sweet :) great work!
| kerryx chapter 2 . 11/22/2010
Absolutely love it - r u goin to write anymore chapters? X
| Godschildtweety chapter 2 . 9/1/2010
That was hot beyond words
| TwiTrinity chapter 2 . 8/23/2010
ok that was seriously fuckin HOT AS FUCK
| motherduckatschool chapter 2 . 7/26/2010
| bananasrgood chapter 2 . 7/21/2010
i love post-breaking dawn stories that are written the RIGHT way. and this one is!
usually people leave out nessie, or make all the vamps human, or forget that bella can let down her sheild so edward hears her!
but u DIDNT, and i freaking love that about this story
lehh go :P
write me backkkk please :)
| bananasrgood chapter 1 . 7/21/2010
What edward did really wasnt that wrongg...
bella must reallyyy have a short temper or somethin!
i love love loveeeeeeeee how u wrote the story
| twilight37 chapter 2 . 3/19/2010
haha, love it
| REDlikesBLACK chapter 2 . 3/14/2010
good job on that.
| rdrumm5 chapter 2 . 2/17/2010
| i-kno-you-want-me chapter 2 . 11/24/2009
very clever very clever indeed
| spartangirl03 chapter 2 . 10/10/2009
Great lemon. ...very aggressive and passionate. ..love ur story!
| little miss chapter 2 . 9/15/2009
thats was great!
| Twilight's evil Pixie chapter 2 . 8/25/2009
Excellent writing. A side of the two characters i would never have even thought could have been there. Well done