This was an awesome read. Thank you.

Superb so far! Can't wait to read the rest. Major kudos fellow author!

Very touching and heartwarming.

I love Rodney-agnst and the story was so belivable. Great job you did with it. Thanks for sharing.

This is a really nice story :) Great work.

Wow... this is such a great first chapter! Draws the reader in and leaves them hanging for more Haha! Great work :)

-gaps in horror and slight fasination-

Oh no! RODNEY! T.T Poor Sheppard, must be having a heart attack! It's so much fun to torture out favorite characters, but sometimes it just makes you want to squeal with horror, expecessily when it's written so well!

You write amazingly. Now if you'll excuse me... i'm off to finish the other chapters!

Amazing! I loved it!

This was an oddly very emotional story. Normally, I have to say all of these Rodney feeling emotional stories don't effect me (very much), however, I have to say this one had me pretty close to tears. It was a great story though, keep writing them!

BTW: I'm slowly working my way through all of your stories!

Awesome. Great job, you have done , touching story,they were in character. Can't wait for the next story.

That was a great story, and while very angsty, it was all justifiable and made for a very interesting reading experience. Plus, I've got to say, I really think you captured McKay's voice. Now give it back - there's a slim chance David Hewlett might need it again.

Nicely done. Mother Hen Shep is a great Shep indeed. Looking forward to more of your work.

This story was really, really good. I enjoyed reading it more than anything else in a while. Excellent idea, imagination and writing! :D

Congrats! Many, many stars!

this was a really good story.

This story was so wonderful that it's hard to describe how I feel. I really liked the support from Sheppard towards Rodney. That wasn't something that we saw alot of in the show, except during certain episodes like "The Shrine" and "Millers Crossing." I always liked those better, instead of the ones that John is teasing Rodney about blowing up a solar system. John was cruel that way. So I prefer shows that John shows the protective big brother.

You know what they say: "Nobody picks on my brother but me."

Anyway, very good job. I hope that I see more stories from you in the future. You have a real gift, and you should show it off.

This was a great post-Memorial Day story.