Reviews for A Red Dawn
zen-aku the spirit of the wolf chapter 4 . 3/8
he seems a little weak, he'd probably destroy priscilla in seconds if he is so much stronger than he was in canon
Guest chapter 22 . 1/8
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Guest chapter 11 . 10/2/2016
really wish there is a dislike option for ... seriously i enjoy it at first till like chapter 11...then you show that bullshit encounter scene that naruto has with danzo. congratulations you manage to kill any interest i have in this story, and leaving me in a murderous mood as well, a first i admit. now if you excuse me, i've got to go kill something
TheDisturbedDragon chapter 22 . 6/21/2016
Damn, this is a great story. I dont know if it'll ever be finished, considering it hasnt been updated in 4 years, but I hope it eventually is.
Fernando overkill chapter 1 . 4/30/2016
please conti...
RPG247 chapter 20 . 3/30/2016
For some reason, I keep coming back to this story. I always enjoy it until around Ch. 19~21, where things become convoluted.

Still, everything before then is consistently good. Part of me really wants to see this story continued or adopted, years though it's been.

In any event, I hope to see more Claymore crossovers of this scale, with as much attention to character introduction and development.

Take note, aspiring Claymore x _ authors.
Rex Resede90 chapter 22 . 12/23/2015
any chance you can continue working on this? this is a damn good story!
JensenDaniels32 chapter 6 . 6/22/2015
Glad it worked out, but Naruto wouldn't break a promise that big just to get home.
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 12 . 2/4/2015
wait so this isn't a Naruto/Luciela/Teresa? oh, damn, i guess im leaving
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 10 . 2/4/2015
c'mon, seriously.. now they can open the fucking gates? that is beyond bullshit... no, even if Teresa's Yoki sensing was similar to Sharingan it would work on Rasengan, otherwise Sasuke would use it...

honestly having Yoma and Claymores able to use Naruto techniques is fucked up and way to OP'd
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 9 . 2/4/2015
hmm, wonder who it is... i swear i am half expecting Madara or perhaps someone from the Organization
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 8 . 2/4/2015
you know that the crystal thing only enhances Mokuton right? otherwise Naruto would never have been able to use Kyuubi's while he had it if it suppressed Yoki like you have made it...

oh, and i really doubt he could teach Clare much as she has from what i would guess Civilian or maybe a little more in Chakra reserves, is around 10-12 (as i think she was around 8-10 when Teresa was killed in canon) so yea, it would take her a damn long time to even get to mid-high Chunin
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 6 . 2/4/2015
you know, Naruto is pretty much just everyone's bitch in this...
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 5 . 2/3/2015
ok, that deal was beyond fucking stupid... he already had Teresa that would help him without any troubling conditions...
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 4 . 2/3/2015
ah god damn it, on one hand i am so happy Teresa is alive but on the other i am pissed that Luciela took him away...
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