Reviews for A Red Dawn
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 12 . 2/4
wait so this isn't a Naruto/Luciela/Teresa? oh, damn, i guess im leaving
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 10 . 2/4
c'mon, seriously.. now they can open the fucking gates? that is beyond bullshit... no, even if Teresa's Yoki sensing was similar to Sharingan it would work on Rasengan, otherwise Sasuke would use it...

honestly having Yoma and Claymores able to use Naruto techniques is fucked up and way to OP'd
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 9 . 2/4
hmm, wonder who it is... i swear i am half expecting Madara or perhaps someone from the Organization
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 8 . 2/4
you know that the crystal thing only enhances Mokuton right? otherwise Naruto would never have been able to use Kyuubi's while he had it if it suppressed Yoki like you have made it...

oh, and i really doubt he could teach Clare much as she has from what i would guess Civilian or maybe a little more in Chakra reserves, is around 10-12 (as i think she was around 8-10 when Teresa was killed in canon) so yea, it would take her a damn long time to even get to mid-high Chunin
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 6 . 2/4
you know, Naruto is pretty much just everyone's bitch in this...
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 5 . 2/3
ok, that deal was beyond fucking stupid... he already had Teresa that would help him without any troubling conditions...
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 4 . 2/3
ah god damn it, on one hand i am so happy Teresa is alive but on the other i am pissed that Luciela took him away...
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 3 . 2/3
ok, if he could get move fast enough to get in front of Teresa than he could obviously have deflected her strikes

anyways, YAY, Teresa is alive!
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 2 . 2/3
oh man, i really hope Teresa don't die... hoping Naruto starts up a new Akatsuki and Teresa becomes a member... hmm, also hoping its a Naruto/Teresa pairing but seeing as you have Luciela tagged it seems likely my hopes are in vain
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 1 . 2/3
hmm, interesting... would have been nice if Kurama and Naruto where on friendlier terms but whatever
MonkeyDGabry chapter 8 . 1/23
it's kinda odd to see naruto acting all emo
tH1s chapter 2 . 12/12/2014
Alligator meat is actually quite a delicacy
Guest chapter 8 . 12/7/2014
One issue: Elfin, not elvin. Elvin isn't a word, and elven means that Irene is an elf. She isn't, she just looks like it.
Guest chapter 7 . 12/7/2014
considering the quality of this story, I have a little challenge for you. What if there was an awakened who never fully accepted that s/he was a monster? What if they were forcibly awakened (like Riful tried with Jean), but they kept themselves under control and only hunted yoma? I would appreciate it if you would try to turn this into a story.
mike yeng chapter 22 . 10/29/2014
Truly a work of art that shocks, me nice plot with integrating both Claymore and Naruto universe together.
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