|Reviews for Mystical Hazards of Love|
| RustyRick chapter 2 . 2/14/2010
Hello, Beatlesfan. Moonwulf here.
I've read through this whole story, and I find this fairly well-written, I liked your depiction of Yae, and it was a overall good take on the whole Yae/Omitsu fan-triangle thing going on in the fanbase, though the only thing I personally don't like is the slightly dissapointing ending, and the love potion item plot is a tad bit too typical, but the way you presentated it with Plasma was very comical.
Overall I do really like your way of writing, and I'll be sure to check out your other fics.
| Copo-chan chapter 1 . 12/5/2009
Da mucha penita TTTT...
Está muy bueno igual xDD..
| Butterfree chapter 2 . 8/12/2009
Hard to find any Goemon fanfictions
I thought it was very nice, and I'm glad that you didn't make either Yae or Omitsu act like snobs towards one another. Usually with these kinds of fanfictions, they do try too hard to make the reader favor one over the other. You didn't do that, so it was pretty good.
The beginning may have been rushed a tad bit though. I mean, Yae's never really shown any type of feelings for Goemon but for it to suddenly happen in your story is a bit of a stretch.