|Reviews for Second Chances|
| Sgt. Tim O chapter 9 . 7/18/2009
holy crap. Shanahan blew it big time. Never liked the guy. Daniel is having a time with the baby. See, guys can take care of a kid. Just give us a chance. Not me of course. Other guys.
| halfcent chapter 9 . 7/16/2009
Pete's such an ass! I think I see where this is heading! And I liked Daniel's sudden defense of Jack.
| hafcent chapter 8 . 7/16/2009
I can just imagine Daniel and Teal'c trying to force Jack to take it easy!
| halfcent chapter 7 . 7/16/2009
"But we're playing," Daniel whined. Men are children, too! Looks like the whole team is bonding with JJ. I like that abbreviated name.
| Halfcent chapter 6 . 7/16/2009
Go, Hammond! How cute that he addresses the baby as a soldier!
| halfcent chapter 5 . 7/16/2009
I can just picture a small baby in all camoflage! even a pacifier! lol. Little future soldier.
| halfcent chapter 4 . 7/16/2009
I hope Hammond sees reason(i guess he does or there wouldn't be a story, huh? lol). Plus, there is the fact the the baby is from another planet- I'd almost forgotten that little detail!
| halfcent chapter 3 . 7/16/2009
I swear by all I hold holy, by my Hippocratic oath, and the entire collection of Simpson
dvds you hold dear...I will bring this child directly to you.” Cute! I liked that. I could just imagine her saying that and Jack's expression.
| halfcent chapter 2 . 7/16/2009
Jack's protectiveness is so cute and touching!
| halfcent chapter 1 . 7/15/2009
I had been putting off reading your story because, though I loved SG1 the show, I never really read SG1 fanfic. Plus, I lost interest in the later seasons and haven't really seen it in a while. But I really wanted to check it out eventually and I'm glad I finally did! It's easy to read and to imagine everything happening as it's written, and I don't see any of the problems you feel you have, such as the dialogue. You seem to be able to catch their verbal interactions just as I remember them happening on the show, and I loved Teal'c's name suggestions! Captain Jean Luc Picard! How funny, I laughed out loud! I'm off to read the rest!
| Alys5 chapter 33 . 7/8/2009
I love this story. I sat and read it late last night hence the review today. I am looking forward to more, especially to see how Jack is going to get Sam to talk to him never mind anything else. SG13 are fab!
| ladysophia28 chapter 4 . 7/6/2009
No the more you read the story you don't even mind the format.I sure didn't notice after the first ,Jack left with the baby!He should get to keep him!
| ladysophia28 chapter 3 . 7/6/2009
Janet sure does know what to say to Jack to make him go on the holy grail,The Simpson dvds,was a good move on her part.:P
| ladysophia28 chapter 2 . 7/6/2009
Ah!Isn't Janet the cutest thing ever!I think it's sweet that Jack is hovering over the already was so funny the baby puked on Jack lol.
| sgt tim chapter 8 . 7/6/2009
don't push it needle girl. (the essentials..eggs and beer) see why we like jack oneill? he speaks our language. what I wouldn't give for some real eggs and a cold one right now! you made me homesick.