Reviews for He Could Be The One
Holy Cross Baby chapter 10 . 8/13/2009
Hehe, that was really an adorable chapter. Update soon
vegenosferatu chapter 10 . 8/12/2009
Yes she is flipping disappointed! Who wouldn't be? Update soon, I love it.
Noel Rosarys Lake chapter 9 . 7/16/2009
Wow. I like you. You write GREAT. Favorited!
vegenosferatu chapter 9 . 7/16/2009
good story keep it up. i love bella and jake, they are so cute together. lovin it!
Esme's Favrite chapter 1 . 7/4/2009
I really like that you were exploring the Jacob side of Bella's lovelife. He seems so loving and genuine,I'd thought about writing about it too. I love Edward but Jake is so warm and I'll add buff and sexy to that. I could totally see them being happy together with those two little black-haired babies.. I agree she seems to like naked Jakey... ALOT! :-)
himynameisliz chapter 7 . 6/30/2009
dude! please tell me she's not confronting him at Sam and Emily's house!

gabbs119 chapter 7 . 6/29/2009
So many conflicting emotions! I really want her to be with Jake he is so good for her. great story update soon
Jacoblover16 chapter 7 . 6/29/2009
love it! update soon please!
sunglasses in the rain chapter 6 . 6/27/2009
poor jake...Bella has him all sorts of confused
himynameisliz chapter 6 . 6/26/2009
more please.
fanfic44 chapter 3 . 6/26/2009
I thought this chapter was very rushed. Like it was a summary of the scenes that happened in new moon. What was the purpose of that? to lead up to something?
sunglasses in the rain chapter 1 . 6/25/2009
update soon please
himynameisliz chapter 4 . 6/25/2009
More please.
sweetheart357 chapter 4 . 6/23/2009
I am really liking this story, you should definitely continue. I am dying to know what happens next!
ijuskeedin chapter 4 . 6/23/2009
Aw! i like this story

I think bella loves naked Jake, lolz
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