|Reviews for Night of Pleasure|
| jwc333096 chapter 1 . 7/15/2015
this is pretty well written i have some lemon stories of my own but haven't been able to post them yet
| Charismatic Beauty chapter 1 . 10/29/2013
that was pretty good for your first lemon. It was really sweet though.
| Tomoko chapter 1 . 8/21/2013
This was so cute
| HogwartianGal chapter 1 . 5/24/2013
| jj chapter 1 . 12/24/2012
| jj chapter 1 . 12/14/2012
| DamonXSalvatore chapter 1 . 8/5/2012
that didn't suck i thought it was a very good piece of work. and i love it was a lemon it was really cute and sweet.
| Isabel chapter 1 . 2/1/2011
Well, the story started really sudenly. But...ihave a THE HELL DOES LEMON MEAN?
| Jennifer chapter 1 . 1/24/2011
TRUNKS WHERE DO YOU GET YOUR SEXINESS OH I KNOW WHERE YOUR SEXY DAD OF COURSE HAHA BY THE WAY I LOVE YOUR STORIES THEYRE REALLY GOOD!;)
| wolfs blood moon chapter 1 . 1/6/2011
it was great ! kept it up ? or does that sound to werid sorry if it does
| Kymerisalla chapter 1 . 9/2/2010
it was fast but good keep it up and you'll get it :)
| mychemicalrelapse chapter 1 . 9/2/2010
pure awesomeness - ive read all your dbz fanfics (the smutty ones anyhow) and LOVE THEM ALL! you are such a good writer. you're oneshots are very well written - just a little issue with spelling mistakes but nothing major :)
i'll be keeping both my eyes open for more of your fics O_O
| CRAZYLILDRIVA17 chapter 1 . 9/19/2009
i just love all ur stories xx
| DBZMaster88 chapter 1 . 9/3/2009
It was good for your first lemon. Maybe next time slow it down a bit add a little more story and try not to make trunks look like a pedifile. No offence.
He was about 9 10 when pan was born