Reviews for do dreams come true
fan-freak121 chapter 1 . 7/17/2010
please please please finish the past book please it is great

please please please finish the past book please it is great

please please please finish the past book please it is great

please please please finish the past book please it is great

please please please finish the past book please it is great

please please please finish the past book please it is great

please please please finish the past book please it is great

please please please finish the past book please it is great

please please please finish the past book please it is great

please please please finish the past book please it is great

please please please finish the past book please it is great
Makalani96789 chapter 1 . 2/24/2010
Hey I hope you update this story it sounds great. And can't wait till you do. :D update ASAP! :D

aloha

maka
BabyGlover chapter 1 . 1/14/2010
keep it going
Those Who Can't Write Read chapter 1 . 9/3/2009
Haha! This rocks. You have a few speeling mistakes but other than that it's good.
Midday Moonlight chapter 1 . 7/12/2009
this is adorable! i can't wait for more! It seems like it will get extremely INTENSE, HURAH!

update soon!
ShipsCollide chapter 1 . 6/23/2009
no i lik it

cnt blame them 4 drooling over him!

poor rory

update soon

-Ash
TeenageDirtbag23 chapter 1 . 6/23/2009
aww wow that was job. update soon please :)
Moment of Insanity chapter 1 . 6/22/2009
You're right with what you say in your author's note. Not because there's a problem with the plot - it might be interesting. But your writing is atrocious. You can't even spell VIDEO for ** sake! I've noticed this with all of your stories. Please stop putting this stuff on line until you've either learnt to write, or found yourself a beta reader. At this point it just looks like really lazy writing.

I mean, what is this supposed to mean? "Yes Maybe permently."

Permently is not a word and you need a full stop (or possibly elipses) between yes and maybe. It's not rocket science; just basic writing skills. I've noticed you have a lot of stories on the go at the moment. Maybe you should just try and focus your attention on one for awhile, until you improve.
SJB chapter 1 . 6/21/2009
Aww, this was too cute. You should definitely continue the story :D
kylielink chapter 1 . 6/19/2009
good start
Jeremy Shane chapter 1 . 6/19/2009
good chapter & more please
Curley-Q chapter 1 . 6/19/2009
LMFAO, I cannot wait to see how Rory will act around Jess now
Lit.foryou chapter 1 . 6/19/2009
omg...the start of the story is great. I love the idea and you write pretty good. Please update soon. I know that I'll love this story!