Reviews for Trapped
Texas Bluebonnet chapter 1 . 6/28/2009
Very good for a first attempt. You have some nice imagery and descriptive lines in there.

A couple of hints: use spell check and allow for more spacing within the story. It helps the readers focus on the ideas you are presenting.

Looking forward to more writings from you.
samanddianefan10 chapter 1 . 6/20/2009
This is interesting...I never thought about them like this before. keep on writing :)