|Reviews for Trapped|
| Texas Bluebonnet chapter 1 . 6/28/2009
Very good for a first attempt. You have some nice imagery and descriptive lines in there.
A couple of hints: use spell check and allow for more spacing within the story. It helps the readers focus on the ideas you are presenting.
Looking forward to more writings from you.
| samanddianefan10 chapter 1 . 6/20/2009
This is interesting...I never thought about them like this before. keep on writing :)