Reviews for Toy With Me
Guest chapter 1 . 9/8/2012
Oh wow, that was really beautiful writing. I really loved the descriptions you got in there of movement and color, it really pulled me in. Even though it was from Skyfire's point of view, I could feel the longing from Starscream, a desperate wish to go back, even though they can't. I about died at the line of his fingers running along Skyfire's underbelly.

Francesca Zatnik chapter 1 . 8/4/2011
"[Starscream] asked, gruff and lonely and somewhere along the way, full of self-loathing."

This last line made me cry.

I thought I'd review, though you seem to disappeared from the face of the internet since the end of 2009, and I'm hoping you're still around somewhere. I miss your stories, and the range of different emotions you can bring out.
BitterSweetDrug chapter 1 . 8/18/2009
I really like this story... the ralationship of these

both is so nice discribed and the thoughts of Skyfire

are also very good mentioned so twisted and yeah you know

just very good written!
Saberfrost chapter 1 . 6/19/2009
Aw thats so sad, but I really hope there's more.
herongale chapter 1 . 6/19/2009
Wow. This is so good. So, so, so good. Short but elegant, the harrowing emotions are so well laid out. Skyfire's feelings are explicit and yet understated... Starscream's completely implicit and not stated at all. It's so bittersweet and mournful and full of tender, frustrating regret.

Wonderful work.
xStarSaber chapter 1 . 6/19/2009
Aww. :)