|Reviews for A Buzz In The Sunset|
| KazeNoSakura chapter 1 . 9/9/2010
Haha! This was a good one! I mean THE Hitsugaya Toshiro is afraid of bees. XD
Although your grammar could use a little improvement, it's really not that bad. . Just keep at it and you'll be as good as gold! Good job!
| KyuubiShinigami-chan chapter 1 . 9/23/2009
I laughed a lot when i read this chapter, almost fell of my chair when i understod why he waved with his arms over his head. I think it is one of the funniest things i have read so far writen by you:) And yes you have gotten better at writing and putting together a chapter.
| strawberry.fishcakes chapter 1 . 6/26/2009
a hehe bz
| winter051094 chapter 1 . 6/25/2009
OMG THIS WAS GREAT! LOL Shiro is scared of a single bee! lol thats great! . well as always, great job! i love it. ok well im off to read ur other wonderful stories!
| Yemi Hikari chapter 1 . 6/20/2009
" 'No, not at the moment, Matsumoto is taking care of it,' " That gramatical error rather stood out. And the other thing is that one used the comma, not the period. Hope that helps.
| Madame Hearts chapter 1 . 6/19/2009
nice twist at the end!
| Moon Of Jupiter chapter 1 . 6/19/2009
Aw, it was cute when he was scared of the bumble bee :D
like this one-shot :D I think you grammar's improved at bit i think.
Not too serious of mistakes.
anyway, keep up the good work!